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A free thinker but not to let thinking be free!

I have just come back here for about two weeks in no connection with the Internet, and today I read a saying of Aristotle by chance on timeline of my Facebook:”Be a free thinker and don't accept everything you hear as truth. Be critical and evaluate what you believe in." Then I make up a title to put my spontaneous ideas into this writing now.

Firstly, we all have our own thoughts freely to think about or of what, that we really want and wish for life. As a great philosopher in Antiquity, Aristotle is also aware of this, suggesting that one should be a free thinker. And as a human who has a right at least for their wanting out-expressed by thoughts without being controlled to full freedom. By this our intellectual skills will be positively developed and created. However, this kind of thinking should be wholesomely oriented because our mind has its function as a-to think about whatever it wants both negatively and positively: if a positive thought generates a pleasant emotion and comfortable bodily sensation. Contrarily, an unwholesome thought triggers a bad result for our body and mind too. We can see this clearly on our mental process every time our mind are thinking of something good or bad, relevantly we feel good or bad feelings right away there, that’s why one should be a free thinker in order to think about our positively oriented thoughts, but do not let the mind be free to think of whatever it wants, negatively, meaning that this thinking will control and give rise to sufferings to us.

Secondly, don't accept everything you hear as truth. Be critical and evaluate what you believe in. This advice sounds convincing. We should not easily jump to any acceptance because of our hearing as truth, only to hear from someone’s information is not enough for us to justify something that is true, rather that should be seriously investigated with a critical mind. Such an open attitude will help to have an extensive vision and to be self-confident in the way we are in life.

In conclusion, it would be great to be a free thinker who can challenge their life with deep investigation of what is happening around and be always willing to learn more!

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I have just come back here forfrom about two weeks inof no internet connection with the Internet, and today I read a saying of Aristotle by chance on my timeline of myn Facebook:”Be a free thinker and don't accept everything you hear as truth.

Be critical and evaluate what you believe in."

Then I makcame up awith this title to put my spontaneous ideas into this writing now.passage.

I think this is what was the meaning behind your sentence but iam not entirely sure.

Firstly, we all have our own thoughts freely to think about or of what, that we really want and wish for life.

I don't fully understand this sentence so i didn't correct it but it does it make much sense

As a great philosopher in Antiquity, Aristotle is also aware of this, suggesting that one should be a free thinker.

And as a human who has athe right to at least for their wanting out-expressed by their thoughts without being controlled to fullis freedom.

By doing this, our intellectual skills will be positively developed and created.

However, this kind of thinking should be wholesomely oriented?? because our mind has its function as a-tothe mind thinks about whatever it wants both negatively and positively: if a. A positive thought generates a pleasant emotion and a comfortable bodily sensation.

Wholesomely is not a word and wholesomely oriented doesn't make sense

CIn contrarily, an unwholesomst , a negative thought triggers a bad result foraction in our body and mind too.

We can see this clearly on our mental process every time our mind areis thinking of something good or bad, relevantlyas a result we feel good or bad feelings right away there, that’s why one should be a free thinker in order to think about ournly positively oriented thoughts, but do not let the mind be free to think of whatever it wants, negatively, meaning that this thinking willhowever thinking negatively can control and give rise to sufferings to us.

Secondly, don't accept everything you hear as truth.

Be critical and evaluate what you believe in.

This advice sounds convincing.

(We should not easily jump to anyd acceptance because of our what we hearing as truth, only tothe information we hear from someone’s information is not enough for us to justify something that is true) , rather than that we should be seriously investigated with a critical mind.

The sentence in the brackets is not fully natural because of the lack on understanding the written sentence
This whole sentence makes little sense actually

Such an open attitude will help us to have an extensive vision and to be self-confident in the way we are in life.

In conclusion, it would be great to be a free thinker who can challenge their life with deep investigationawareness of what is happening around and beto always be willing to learn more!

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panya

Aug. 16, 2022

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(We should not easily jump to anyd acceptance because of our what we hearing as truth, only tothe information we hear from someone’s information is not enough for us to justify something that is true) , rather than that we should be seriously investigated with a critical mind.

My idea here is not clear.

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panya

Aug. 16, 2022

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Then I makcame up awith this title to put my spontaneous ideas into this writing now.passage.

Yes, that’s it.

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panya

Aug. 16, 2022

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Firstly, we all have our own thoughts freely to think about or of what, that we really want and wish for life.

I mean, we should train or cultivate our mind in order not to let it freely wander where it wants.

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panya

Aug. 16, 2022

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Well, there are much more a lot of mistakes than I thought. Thanks!

A free thinker but not to let thinking be free!


I have just come back here for about two weeks in no connection with the Internet, and today I read a saying of Aristotle by chance on timeline of my Facebook:”Be a free thinker and don't accept everything you hear as truth.


I have just come back here forfrom about two weeks inof no internet connection with the Internet, and today I read a saying of Aristotle by chance on my timeline of myn Facebook:”Be a free thinker and don't accept everything you hear as truth.

Be critical and evaluate what you believe in."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then I make up a title to put my spontaneous ideas into this writing now.


Then I makcame up awith this title to put my spontaneous ideas into this writing now.passage.

I think this is what was the meaning behind your sentence but iam not entirely sure.

Firstly, we all have our own thoughts freely to think about or of what, that we really want and wish for life.


Firstly, we all have our own thoughts freely to think about or of what, that we really want and wish for life.

I don't fully understand this sentence so i didn't correct it but it does it make much sense

As a great philosopher in Antiquity, Aristotle is also aware of this, suggesting that one should be a free thinker.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And as a human who has a right at least for their wanting out-expressed by thoughts without being controlled to full freedom.


And as a human who has athe right to at least for their wanting out-expressed by their thoughts without being controlled to fullis freedom.

By this our intellectual skills will be positively developed and created.


By doing this, our intellectual skills will be positively developed and created.

However, this kind of thinking should be wholesomely oriented because our mind has its function as a-to think about whatever it wants both negatively and positively: if a positive thought generates a pleasant emotion and comfortable bodily sensation.


However, this kind of thinking should be wholesomely oriented?? because our mind has its function as a-tothe mind thinks about whatever it wants both negatively and positively: if a. A positive thought generates a pleasant emotion and a comfortable bodily sensation.

Wholesomely is not a word and wholesomely oriented doesn't make sense

Contrarily, an unwholesome thought triggers a bad result for our body and mind too.


CIn contrarily, an unwholesomst , a negative thought triggers a bad result foraction in our body and mind too.

We can see this clearly on our mental process every time our mind are thinking of something good or bad, relevantly we feel good or bad feelings right away there, that’s why one should be a free thinker in order to think about our positively oriented thoughts, but do not let the mind be free to think of whatever it wants, negatively, meaning that a kind of thinking will control and give rise to sufferings to us.


Secondly, don't accept everything you hear as truth.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Be critical and evaluate what you believe in.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This advice sounds convincing.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We should not easily jump to any acceptance because of our hearing as truth, only to hear from someone’s information is not enough for us to justify something that is true, rather that should be seriously investigated with a critical mind.


(We should not easily jump to anyd acceptance because of our what we hearing as truth, only tothe information we hear from someone’s information is not enough for us to justify something that is true) , rather than that we should be seriously investigated with a critical mind.

The sentence in the brackets is not fully natural because of the lack on understanding the written sentence This whole sentence makes little sense actually

Such an open attitude will help to have an extensive vision and to be self-confident in the way we are in life.


Such an open attitude will help us to have an extensive vision and to be self-confident in the way we are in life.

In conclusion, it would be great to be a free thinker who can challenge their life with deep investigation of what is happening around and be always willing to learn more!


In conclusion, it would be great to be a free thinker who can challenge their life with deep investigationawareness of what is happening around and beto always be willing to learn more!

We can see this clearly on our mental process every time our mind are thinking of something good or bad, relevantly we feel good or bad feelings right away there, that’s why one should be a free thinker in order to think about our positively oriented thoughts, but do not let the mind be free to think of whatever it wants, negatively, meaning that this thinking will control and give rise to sufferings to us.


We can see this clearly on our mental process every time our mind areis thinking of something good or bad, relevantlyas a result we feel good or bad feelings right away there, that’s why one should be a free thinker in order to think about ournly positively oriented thoughts, but do not let the mind be free to think of whatever it wants, negatively, meaning that this thinking willhowever thinking negatively can control and give rise to sufferings to us.

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