July 12, 2022
I have a problem with my fountain pen. I usually use this for drawing, but last week I left it some days loaded with ink and now it does not work properly. I disassembled and cleaned it some days ago, but not work fine yet. I think I must disassemble it and clean again. Of course, this is not a big problem, but I will need my fountain pen in the next weeks and I would like that it was ok.
I usually use ithis for drawing, but last week I left, it some days loaded with ink, and others not. and now it does not work properly.
This implies it is right in your hand and you’re showing me; that would be the only appropriate context to refer to it physically.
I added “and others not”; others refers to the other days you didn’t as you said “some days”; this is an incomplete clause and implies a comparison
I disassembled and cleaned it some days ago, but not work fine yetyet it fails me.
More nature and dramatic
Of course, this is not a big problem, but I will probably need my fountain pen in the next few weeks and I would like that it was ok.thus I need it to be functional.
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I have a problem with my fountain pen.
I usually use ithis for drawing, but last week I left it some days loaded with ink for a few days and now it does not work properly.
I disassembled and cleaned it some days ago, but it still does not work fine yetwell.
I think I must disassemble it and clean again.
Of course, this is not a big problem, but I will need my fountain pen in the next few weeks and I would like that it was oko work right.
I usually use ithis for drawing, but last week, I left it some days loaded with ink for a few days, and now it does not work properly.
you need a comma before "and" if the two sentences that are being separated can be sentences by themselves
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Of course, this is not a bighuge problem, but I will need my fountain pen in the nextcoming weeks, and I would like that it wasit to be ok.
"huge problem" is more natural
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