Oct. 21, 2021
A fire extinguisher
Now, the object of red color I have close to me is a fire extinguisher. It'is a long metallic tube full of a water, foam or gas, like for example, CO2. I think, by an international norma all the fire extinguishers are of red color. Its use is quate apparent. When there is a fire, you must to steer these fluids toward fire. Always is interesting to read the instruccions, printed on one side of the extinguisher, before an emergency. Also is necessary to check the expire date and the manometer if they have.
A fire extinguisher
Now, the red object of red color I have close to me is a fire extinguisher.
It' is a long metallic tube full of a water, foam orand gas, like for example, CO2.
"water", "foam", and "gas" is plural so no need to say "a"
I think, by an international normarule requires all the fire extinguishers arto be of red color.
Its use is quaite apparent.
When there is a fire, you must to steerdirect these fluids towards the fire.
AIt is always is interesting to read the instrucctions, printed on one side of the extinguisher, before an emergency.
Also isIt is also necessary to check the expireation date and the manometer if they have one.
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It is very nicely written, I would just recommend changing some words to make it sound more natural, but for your level it is really good. Check your spelling too. Well done! :)
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Now, the object of red color I have close to me is a fire extinguisher. Now, the red object |
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It'is a long metallic tube full of a water, foam or gas, like for example, CO2. It "water", "foam", and "gas" is plural so no need to say "a" |
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I think, by an international norma all the fire extinguishers are of red color. I think, |
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Its use is quate apparent. Its use is qu |
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When there is a fire, you must to steer these fluids toward fire. When there is a fire, you must |
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Always is interesting to read the instruccions, printed on one side of the extinguisher, before an emergency.
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Also is necessary to check the expire date and the manometer if they have.
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