Dec. 20, 2021
A Finnish Movie
Yesterday, we spent the evening watching an interesting Finnish film. The name's movie is "The Grump" and the storyline is about a old man that lives in Tampere, a city in the south of Finland. He is an old and bad mood grunch, who has an accident working at home. But for his recover he must go to Helsinski for some days. He move to the home of his daughter-in-law, creating her a lot of problems.
He is an old and in a bad mood grunch, who has an accident working at home.
Is grunch the word you want o be using? It's defined as "an ugly or nasty person; a repellent person."
Dec. 21, 2021
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Yesterday, we spent the evening watching an interesting Finnish film.
The name's movimovie's name is "The Grump" and the storyline is about an old man that lives in Tampere, a city in the south of Finland.
He is an old and bad mood grunch, who hasgot into an accident working at home.
grunch is not a word.
But for his recovery, he must go to Helsinski for somea few days.
some days is technically correct, but a few days is what commonly people say.
He move s into the home of his daughter-in-law, creating her a lot of problems. for her.
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your passage was great! good grammar and spelling. only a few linguistic changes here and there! keep going.
Dec. 21, 2021
Thanks for the corrections.
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The name's movie is "The Grump" and the storyline is about a old man that lives in Tampere, a city in the south of Finland. The |
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He is an old and bad mood grunch, who has an accident working at home. He is an old and bad mood grunch, who grunch is not a word. He is Is grunch the word you want o be using? It's defined as "an ugly or nasty person; a repellent person." |
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But for his recover he must go to Helsinski for some days. But for his recovery, he must go to Helsin some days is technically correct, but a few days is what commonly people say. |
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He move to the home of his daughter-in-law, creating her a lot of problems. He move |
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