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Co

Sept. 6, 2024

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A few words about India

Hi, dear friend!
I like your interest about my travelling.
Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom - if husband is dead, his wife burn with him!
Yes, my way go across the jungle - I am so scary to see scorpion or snake.
I always dream about travel by an elephant - once in my childhood I rode a horse.
Which country do you want to visit next?

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I like your interest aboutin my travelling.

Yesterday, I klearnewd that India haves an old horror custom -; if a husband is dead, his wife burns with him!

Yes, my way goMy path cuts across the jungle -. I am so scary toed that I will see a scorpion or a snake.

I always dream aboutt of travelling by an elephant - once during my childhood, I rode a horse.

Which/what country do you want to visit next?

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Co

Sept. 7, 2024

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Thank you!
I remember phrase “path cuts”

A fFew wWords aAbout India

Hi, dear friend!

I like your to show interests about my travellings.

Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom -: if the husband is dead, his wife burns with him!

Yes, on my way go across the jungle -, I amwas so scaryed to see scorpions or snakes.

I would keep the verbs in a consistent tense here. Use the past tense consistently in this sentence.

I always dream about traveling by an elephant - o. Once in my childhood, I rode a horse.

Do you mean that you want to travel by riding an elephant or travel besides an elephant?

Which country do you want to visit next?

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I want to explore Finland more to go to one of their saunas.

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Co

Sept. 6, 2024

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Now I also want to go to Finland. Thanks for correcting!
I want to ask: I wanted to say travel by riding an elephant - Could I write right?

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marblemenow

Sept. 6, 2024

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You're welcome. You can say, "I always dream about riding an elephant. One time, I rode a horse as a child."

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Co

Sept. 7, 2024

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thank you for the clarification 👍🏻👍🏻

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marblemenow

Sept. 7, 2024

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You're welcome.

I likappreciate your interest aboutin my travellings.

Yesterday, I klearnewd that India haved an old horrorhorrible old custom - ifwhen the husband is deadied, his wife burned with him!

Yes, my way goI am going across the jungle - I am so scaryed to see a scorpion or snake.

I always dream aboutof travelling by an elephant - once in my childhood Ias a child I once rode a horse.

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Very good!

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Co

Sept. 6, 2024

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Thank you!
Please, can you explain: how understand where use “travelling” and where “travel”?

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dlee73

Sept. 7, 2024

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You would use "travelling" in sentences like: Travelling is very fun, I am travelling, I have been travelling, I have always dreamed of travelling. You dream of doING something. However, you tell stories about your travels, people are interested in your travels, your travels have taken you all over the world.

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Co

Sept. 7, 2024

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I understand, thanks a lot 🙏🏻

A few words about India


A fFew wWords aAbout India

Hi, dear friend!


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I like your interest about my travelling.


I likappreciate your interest aboutin my travellings.

I like your to show interests about my travellings.

I like your interest aboutin my travelling.

Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom - if husband is dead, his wife burn with him!


Yesterday, I klearnewd that India haved an old horrorhorrible old custom - ifwhen the husband is deadied, his wife burned with him!

Yesterday, I knew that India have an old horror custom -: if the husband is dead, his wife burns with him!

Yesterday, I klearnewd that India haves an old horror custom -; if a husband is dead, his wife burns with him!

Yes, my way go across the jungle - I am so scary to see scorpion or snake.


Yes, my way goI am going across the jungle - I am so scaryed to see a scorpion or snake.

Yes, on my way go across the jungle -, I amwas so scaryed to see scorpions or snakes.

I would keep the verbs in a consistent tense here. Use the past tense consistently in this sentence.

Yes, my way goMy path cuts across the jungle -. I am so scary toed that I will see a scorpion or a snake.

I always dream about travel by an elephant - once in my childhood I rode a horse.


I always dream aboutof travelling by an elephant - once in my childhood Ias a child I once rode a horse.

I always dream about traveling by an elephant - o. Once in my childhood, I rode a horse.

Do you mean that you want to travel by riding an elephant or travel besides an elephant?

I always dream aboutt of travelling by an elephant - once during my childhood, I rode a horse.

Which country do you want to visit next?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Which/what country do you want to visit next?

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