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newcreation

Jan. 9, 2022

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A few sentences I want to be corrected again.

Who do you leave your children with? Nanny, grandparents or close friends?

Do You let your children with someone responsible or Do you leave them with anyone ?

Which one is correct:
I'm not one of the most adventurous people...or I 'm not among the most adventurous people or I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but..

The new school director gives the Parents the security they didn't have with the former director.

I didn 't go out with friends of the University but with friends of my neighborhood instead

My Schedule doesn't match with my wife's so I have to get me a different job with a morning shift.

Children are mainly parents responsibility so it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or look after them) and Spend lots of time teaching them.

Do you develop your character or personality ?
As a Person (or as someone) who loves Soccer I'm not into technology in sports


<p dir="ltr"><span>Who do you leave your children with? Nanny, grandparents or close friends</span><span>?</span></p>
<p dir="ltr"></p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>Do You let your children with someone responsible or Do you leave them with anyone ?</span></p>
<p dir="ltr">&nbsp;</p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>Which one is correct:</span></p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>I'm not one of the most adventurous people</span><span>...or </span><span>I 'm not among the most adventurous people</span><span> or </span><span>I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but</span><span>..</span></p>
<p dir="ltr">&nbsp;</p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>The new school director gives the Parents the security they didn't have with the former director.</span></p>
<p dir="ltr">&nbsp;</p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>I didn 't go out with </span><span>friends of</span><span> the University but with </span><span>friends of </span><span>my neighborhood instead&nbsp;</span></p>
<p dir="ltr">&nbsp;</p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>My Schedule </span><span>doesn't match</span><span> with my wife's so I have to get me a different job with a morning shift.</span></p>
<p dir="ltr">&nbsp;</p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>Children are mainly parents responsibility so&nbsp; it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or </span><span>look after them</span><span>) and&nbsp; Spend lots of time teaching them.</span></p>
<p dir="ltr">&nbsp;</p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>Do you develop your </span><span>character</span><span> or </span><span>personality</span><span> ?</span></p>
<p dir="ltr"><span>As a Person (or </span><span>as someone</span><span>) who loves Soccer I'm not into technology in sports</span></p>

Corrections

A few sentences I want to be corrected again.

Who do you leave your children with?

NA nanny, grandparents or close friends?

Do Yyou letave your children with someone responsible or Ddo you leave them with anyone ?

Maybe using "would you" instead would sound a bit more natural.

Which one is correct:

I'm not one of the most adventurous people...or I 'm not among the most adventurous people or I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but..

1st and 3rd sound more natural, but all of them would be okay.

The new school director gives the Pparents the security they didn't have with the former director.

I didn 't go out with friends of the Ufrom university but with friends ofrom my neighborhood instead.

My Sschedule doesn't match with my wife's so I have to get me a different job with a morning shift.

You could also use myself, like "get myself a different job".

Children are mainly the parents' responsibility so it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or look after them) and Sspend lots of time teaching them.

For just one parent the apostrophe would be parent's instead, but if you're referring to both then use parents'.

Do you develop your character or personality ?

Honestly not sure what you want to say here, this sentence is a little confusing.

As a Pperson (or as someone) who loves Ssoccer, I'm not into technology inand sports.

A few sentences that I want to be corrected again.

Who do you leave your children with?

Do You let your children with someone responsible or Ddo you leave them with anyonewhoever ?

I'm not one of the most adventurous people...or I 'm not among the most adventurous people or I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but..

all correct but i think the last one is the most commonly used

The new school director gives the Parents the security they didn't have withat the former director didn't provide.

its correct but if you want to make it fancier

I didn 't go out with friends of the University but with friends ofuniversity friends but with my neighborhood friends ¶
or¶
I didn't go out with university friends, instead i went with
my neighborhood insteadfriends ¶

My Schedule doesn't match with my wife's so I have to get me a different job with a morning shift.

Children are mainly the parents responsibility so it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or look after them) and Sto spend a lots of time teaching them.

Do you develop your character or personality ?

develope character and grow a personality, thats what is the common usage

As a Person (or as someone) who loves Soccer I'm not into technology in sports

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newcreation

Jan. 10, 2022

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Thanks a thousand times for your help!

Who do you leave your children with?


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A few sentences I want to be corrected again.


A few sentences that I want to be corrected again.

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Nanny, grandparents or close friends?


NA nanny, grandparents or close friends?

Do You let your children with someone responsible or Do you leave them with anyone ?


Do You let your children with someone responsible or Ddo you leave them with anyonewhoever ?

Do Yyou letave your children with someone responsible or Ddo you leave them with anyone ?

Maybe using "would you" instead would sound a bit more natural.

Which one is correct:


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I'm not one of the most adventurous people...or I 'm not among the most adventurous people or I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but..


I'm not one of the most adventurous people...or I 'm not among the most adventurous people or I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but..

all correct but i think the last one is the most commonly used

I'm not one of the most adventurous people...or I 'm not among the most adventurous people or I'm not the most adventurous person in the world but..

1st and 3rd sound more natural, but all of them would be okay.

The new school director gives the Parents the security they didn't have with the former director.


The new school director gives the Parents the security they didn't have withat the former director didn't provide.

its correct but if you want to make it fancier

The new school director gives the Pparents the security they didn't have with the former director.

I didn 't go out with friends of the University but with friends of my neighborhood instead


I didn 't go out with friends of the University but with friends ofuniversity friends but with my neighborhood friends ¶
or¶
I didn't go out with university friends, instead i went with
my neighborhood insteadfriends ¶

I didn 't go out with friends of the Ufrom university but with friends ofrom my neighborhood instead.

My Schedule doesn't match with my wife's so I have to get me a different job with a morning shift.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My Sschedule doesn't match with my wife's so I have to get me a different job with a morning shift.

You could also use myself, like "get myself a different job".

Children are mainly parents responsibility so it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or look after them) and Spend lots of time teaching them.


Children are mainly the parents responsibility so it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or look after them) and Sto spend a lots of time teaching them.

Children are mainly the parents' responsibility so it's better for a father or a mother to be in charge (or look after them) and Sspend lots of time teaching them.

For just one parent the apostrophe would be parent's instead, but if you're referring to both then use parents'.

Do you develop your character or personality ?


Do you develop your character or personality ?

develope character and grow a personality, thats what is the common usage

Do you develop your character or personality ?

Honestly not sure what you want to say here, this sentence is a little confusing.

As a Person (or as someone) who loves Soccer I'm not into technology in sports


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As a Pperson (or as someone) who loves Ssoccer, I'm not into technology inand sports.

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