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A Description of a Family Experience

I had an internal debate between going to my father-in-law's house where my family is living andin order to presenting myself in person you know instead of just making a dry, impersonal bank transfer to her.

You should state who "her" is. The reader doesn't know who you're talking about.

We ate dinner as a family with everybody seat oned at the table,. I madesaid a prayer thanking the food as we used to do.

When I was about to leave, it happens something really, really touching happened.

While I was still seated at the table and starting to say goodbye, my little almost six-year-old kid, approached me, took my face with his two little hands, and started to kiss me very, very tenderly, h. He gave me a lot of soft, tender kisses and after a few seconds in whichle I was toucheding the sky, he stopped and hugged me and at the same time he told me, "'Daddy, I am going to miss you so much."

aww!

The last sentence is beautiful.

'daddy I am going to miss you so much'.

The quotation belongs with the previous sentence.

That was completely out of the blue, n. Nobody was expecting it,. It was unplanned and spontaneous.

This is better in three sentences.

Thatis made his mother sigh, and tell 'wsay, "What a lovely little boy I have." She was touched by it, too.

aww!

ADescription of a family experience description

I had an internal debate between going to my father-in-law's house where my family is living and, you know, presenting myself in person you know instead of just making a dry, impersonal bankmoney transfer to her.

If you meant to use the "you know" in a casual, off-handed way, you have to insert it between commas to emulate the verbal pause someone would use while speaking

Bank transfer is not as common as money transfer

We ate dinner as a family with everybody seat oned at the table,. I made a prayer thanking the food as we used to do.

" seated" as an adjective to use in this context compared to "seat" - noun or verb
on the table = you are sitting on top of the table. If you are gathered around the table = at the table

When I was about to leave, it happens something really, really touching. happened

While I was still seated at the table and just starting to say goodbye, my little almost six-year-old little kid, approached me, took my face with his two little hands, and started to kiss me very, very tenderly, h. He gave me a lot of soft, tender kisses and after a few seconds in which I touched the skyof being in Cloud 9, he stopped and hugged me, and at the same time he told me

If it hasnt been long since you started saying goodbye, you can say "just started"
If you are using "a lot" and linking it to a noun afterwards, you say "a lot of (noun)"
A common saying that describes a happy, floaty feeling is "being in Cloud "

'dDaddy, I am going to miss you so much'.

Capitalize first word of a sentence. Also, cute!!

That was completely out of the blue, n. Nobody was expecting it,. It was unplanned and spontaneous.

That made his mother sigh, and tell me 'what a lovely little boy I have" She was touched by it.

I had an internal debate between going to my father-in-law's house where my family is living and presenting myself in person you know instead of, you know, just making a dry, impersonal bank transfer to her.

We ate dinner as a family and everybody was seat on the table, I made a prayer thanking the food as we used to do.

When I was about to leave, it happens something really, really touching happened.

While I was still seated at the table and starting to sayaying goodbye, my little almost six-year-old kid, approached me, took my face with his two little hands, and started to kiss me very, very tenderly, he gave me a lot of soft, tender kisses and after a few seconds in which I touched the sky, he stopped and hugged me and at the same time he told me:

'dDaddy I am going to miss you so much,'.

That was completely out of the blue, nobody was expecting it, Iit was unplanned and spontaneous.

That made his mother sigh, and tellsay 'what a lovely little boy I have" S, she was touched by it.