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I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issue.

When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference, saying that we should study hard. At the same time, he also warned that some students were found secretly in love. He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished. I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love. I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting.

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I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting.

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I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.

Your sentence is technically correct, but meaning-wise you need to specify what group you were the youngest in. Students? Family members?

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I just felt scared, but instead, and I completely forgot about "the fact that some students were secretly dating students of their opposite sex" after the meeting.

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I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.

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I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," but to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issuedea.

I have no idea what you mean with this sentence. How can you not know the meaning of the phrase “relationship between man and woman”? And WHAT do you want to make accurate?

You can “express” an idea, but not an issue. You can “describe” an issue.

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When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference(?), saying that we should study hard.

“Conference” probably isn’t the right word. Do you mean a student “assembly,” where the students gather in an auditorium and listen to some adults say things to them?

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在一次在线课上,我向老师叙述发生在我初中时的一件事。校长警告说发现部分同学在学校有早恋现象。我不知道怎么用英语说“谈恋爱”。后来在老师发给我的修改中她用了“relationship between men and women.” 我不知道这段英语是表示谈恋爱还是发生关系的意思,所以课后我写了这段话,说明只是谈恋爱,并不是发生了性关系。

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I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issue.


I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," but to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issuedea. I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," but to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this idea.

I have no idea what you mean with this sentence. How can you not know the meaning of the phrase “relationship between man and woman”? And WHAT do you want to make accurate? You can “express” an idea, but not an issue. You can “describe” an issue.

I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman,." to make itTo express myself accurately, I wrote a brief paragraph to further expresslaborate this issue. I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman." To express myself accurately, I wrote a brief paragraph to further elaborate this issue.

我这里用比较随意的生词, you could replace express/accurately/elaborate with some other similar words.

I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," to make itso to be accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further expresslain this issue. I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," so to be accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further explain this issue.

When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference, saying that we should study hard.


When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference(?), saying that we should study hard. When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference(?), saying that we should study hard.

“Conference” probably isn’t the right word. Do you mean a student “assembly,” where the students gather in an auditorium and listen to some adults say things to them?

When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conferencen assembly, saying that we should study hard. When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at an assembly, saying that we should study hard.

Conference is more like when people get together to discuss things as equals, vs. assembly which is often used in "school assembly" where lots of people gather (are assembled) to hear announcements from a few people.

When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference, saying that we should study hard. When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference saying that we should study hard.

At the same time, he also warned that some students were found secretly in love.


At the same time, he also warned that some students were foundhad been found to be secretly in love. At the same time, he also warned that some students had been found to be secretly in love.

At the same time, he also warned that some students were found secretly in lovehiding relationships. At the same time, he also warned that some students were hiding relationships.

At the same time, he also warned that some students were found to be secretly in love. At the same time, he also warned that some students were found to be secretly in love.

He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished.


He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and if we didn't listenobey the rules, we would be severely punished. He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and if we didn't obey the rules, we would be severely punished.

He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and, if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished. He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and, if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished.

He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and, if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished. He said that this was absolutely not allowed and, if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished.

I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.


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I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love. I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.

Your sentence is technically correct, but meaning-wise you need to specify what group you were the youngest in. Students? Family members?

I was the youngest at that time, and so I didn't know what it meant to be in love. I was the youngest at that time so I didn't know what it meant to be in love.

I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting.


I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting. I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students secretly dating the opposite sex" after the meeting.

I just felt scared, but instead, and I completely forgot about "the fact that some students were secretly dating students of their opposite sex" after the meeting. I just felt scared instead, and I completely forgot about the fact that some students were secretly dating students of the opposite sex after the meeting.

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