Feb. 7, 2023
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I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issue.
When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference, saying that we should study hard. At the same time, he also warned that some students were found secretly in love. He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished. I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love. I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting.
An English Paragraph
I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," to make itso to be accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further expresslain this issue.
When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference, saying that we should study hard.
At the same time, he also warned that some students were found to be secretly in love.
He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and, if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished.
I was the youngest at that time, and so I didn't know what it meant to be in love.
I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting.
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Nice story and well written!
Feb. 7, 2023
Thank you very much!
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I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman,." to make itTo express myself accurately, I wrote a brief paragraph to further expresslaborate this issue.
我这里用比较随意的生词, you could replace express/accurately/elaborate with some other similar words.
When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conferencen assembly, saying that we should study hard.
Conference is more like when people get together to discuss things as equals, vs. assembly which is often used in "school assembly" where lots of people gather (are assembled) to hear announcements from a few people.
At the same time, he also warned that some students were found secretly in lovehiding relationships.
He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and, if we didn't listen, we would be severely punished.
I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.
Your sentence is technically correct, but meaning-wise you need to specify what group you were the youngest in. Students? Family members?
I just felt scared, but instead, and I completely forgot about "the fact that some students were secretly dating students of their opposite sex" after the meeting.
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Great work! 我上中文课时有一天讨论早恋暗恋哈哈，我觉得这里对早恋的态度比较轻松，其实有的家长也鼓励你约会/找男女朋友。
Feb. 7, 2023
I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.
我是学校中最年轻的学生。
Feb. 7, 2023
那时候，学生早恋是绝对不允许的。
Feb. 7, 2023
I just felt scared, but instead, and I completely forgot about "the fact that some students were secretly dating students of their opposite sex" after the meeting.
我的意思是：当时听到有人谈对象感到很害怕，但会后我就把这事给忘了。
Feb. 7, 2023
谢谢你的修改！
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I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," but to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issuedea.
I have no idea what you mean with this sentence. How can you not know the meaning of the phrase “relationship between man and woman”? And WHAT do you want to make accurate?
You can “express” an idea, but not an issue. You can “describe” an issue.
When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference(?), saying that we should study hard.
“Conference” probably isn’t the right word. Do you mean a student “assembly,” where the students gather in an auditorium and listen to some adults say things to them?
At the same time, he also warned that some students were foundhad been found to be secretly in love.
He said that this was absolutely not allowed, and if we didn't listenobey the rules, we would be severely punished.
I was the youngest at that time, and I didn't know what it meant to be in love.
I just felt scared, but I completely forgot about "some students were secretly dating their opposite sex" after the meeting.
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Everything makes sense to me except the first sentence.
Feb. 7, 2023
I don't know the exact meaning of "relationship between man and woman," but to make it accurate, I wrote a brief paragraph to further express this issuedea.
在一次在线课上，我向老师叙述发生在我初中时的一件事。校长警告说发现部分同学在学校有早恋现象。我不知道怎么用英语说“谈恋爱”。后来在老师发给我的修改中她用了“relationship between men and women.” 我不知道这段英语是表示谈恋爱还是发生关系的意思，所以课后我写了这段话，说明只是谈恋爱，并不是发生了性关系。
Feb. 7, 2023
When I was in middle school, the headmaster once spoke at a conference(?), saying that we should study hard.
是的，学校召开全体学生大会，校长在会上讲话。
Feb. 7, 2023
谢谢你的修改！
Feb. 7, 2023
在一次在线课上，我向老师叙述发生在我初中时的一件事。校长警告说发现部分同学在学校有早恋现象。我不知道怎么用英语说“谈恋爱”。后来在老师发给我的修改中她用了“relationship between men and women.” 我不知道这段英语是表示谈恋爱还是发生关系的意思，所以课后我写了这段话，说明只是谈恋爱，并不是发生了性关系。
For “谈恋爱” you can usually use “dating”. “The principal said that two students were dating.”
Feb. 8, 2023
谢谢！
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