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March 9, 2021

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A Electricity Bill

Today, my electricity bill for February was sent, and the cost was surprisingly high. It's almost twice higher than the price of a month in the summer season. I used an electric heater and stayed at home for a long time, so the cost is not strange. I want Spring to come soon!

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An Electricity Bill

If a word begins with a vowel (aeiou), we always use the article "an" instead of "a" before it.

Today, I received my electricity bill for February was sent, and the cost was surprisingly high.

I always have a hard time with あげる and もらう in Japanese, too.

It's almost twice as higher than the pricecost of a month in the summer season.

This sounds more natural in the US.

Alternatives:
It's almost twice as high than the cost of a month during the summer.
It's almost twice as high than the cost during the summer.
It's almost twice as high than a summer month.
It's almost twice as high than the cost of a summer month.

I used an electric heater and stayed at home for a longmost of the time, so the cost is not strabill isn't surprisinge.

This sounds more natural in the US. While we can use "変" in Japanese, in US English, we don't often use it this way.

I want Spring to come soon!

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すごいです。暖かくなってくるといいです!

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ponta

March 11, 2021

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添削ありがとうございます!春が待ち遠しいです^^

An Electricity Bill

Before a vowel put an instead of a

Today, I got my electricity bill for February was sent, and, the cost was surprisingly high.

It's almost twice higher thandouble the price of a month in the summer season.

I used an electric heater and stayed at home for a long time, so the cost is not strangea lot, so I am not surprised.

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ponta

March 11, 2021

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Thank you for your correction!

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March 11, 2021

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No problem. I recently posted a small piece of writing in Japanese, would you mind checking it for me? 😄😄

A Electricity Bill


An Electricity Bill

Before a vowel put an instead of a

An Electricity Bill

If a word begins with a vowel (aeiou), we always use the article "an" instead of "a" before it.

Today, my electricity bill for February was sent, and the cost was surprisingly high.


Today, I got my electricity bill for February was sent, and, the cost was surprisingly high.

Today, I received my electricity bill for February was sent, and the cost was surprisingly high.

I always have a hard time with あげる and もらう in Japanese, too.

It's almost twice higher than the price of a month in the summer season.


It's almost twice higher thandouble the price of a month in the summer season.

It's almost twice as higher than the pricecost of a month in the summer season.

This sounds more natural in the US. Alternatives: It's almost twice as high than the cost of a month during the summer. It's almost twice as high than the cost during the summer. It's almost twice as high than a summer month. It's almost twice as high than the cost of a summer month.

I used an electric heater and stayed at home for a long time, so the cost is not strange.


I used an electric heater and stayed at home for a long time, so the cost is not strangea lot, so I am not surprised.

I used an electric heater and stayed at home for a longmost of the time, so the cost is not strabill isn't surprisinge.

This sounds more natural in the US. While we can use "変" in Japanese, in US English, we don't often use it this way.

I want Spring to come soon!


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