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666coolboy

July 6, 2022

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a dumb leader

I find out I have a dumb leader. I am going to resign the job by Friday. And today we have a group game to play as game designers, he is a noob, very stupid at playing our games, and I am in the team with him. He always like to talk some shit:" why are you doing this, you should do that." some shit like this with a mad face. You know, he always keep smiling to his leaders but always mad to me. This kind of person is really hated.

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I fiound out that I have a dumb leaderboss.

I am going to resign thefrom this job by Friday.

And tToday we have a group game to play as game designers, h. He is a noob, and very stupid at playing our games, and I am ion the team with him.

He always likes to talk some shit:" w. "Why are you doing this, you should do that."

Always some shit like thisat with a mad face.

You know, he always keep smiling to his leadersHe always smiles at his bosses, but is always mad ato me.

i wouldn't use "always" so many times in a row, but since this paragraph is very casual i think it's alright.

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666coolboy

July 7, 2022

1

Thank you!

a dumb leaderboss

"Leader" is very general. At work we always say "boss".

I fiound out I have a dumb leaderboss.

I am going to resign from the job by Friday.

And today we have a group game to play as game designers, h. He is a noob, very stupid at playing our games, and I am in the team with him.

Be wary of run-on sentences.

He always likes to talk some shit:" w, "Why are you doing this, y? You should do that."

some shit likeHe always says this with a mad face.

You know, he always keep smiling to his leaderbosses but is always mad ato me.

666coolboy's avatar
666coolboy

July 7, 2022

1

Thank you

a dumb leader


a dumb leaderboss

"Leader" is very general. At work we always say "boss".

I find out I have a dumb leader.


I fiound out I have a dumb leaderboss.

I fiound out that I have a dumb leaderboss.

I am going to resign the job by Friday.


I am going to resign from the job by Friday.

I am going to resign thefrom this job by Friday.

And today we have a group game to play as game designers, he is a noob, very stupid at playing our games, and I am in the team with him.


And today we have a group game to play as game designers, h. He is a noob, very stupid at playing our games, and I am in the team with him.

Be wary of run-on sentences.

And tToday we have a group game to play as game designers, h. He is a noob, and very stupid at playing our games, and I am ion the team with him.

He always like to talk some shit:" why are you doing this, you should do that."


He always likes to talk some shit:" w, "Why are you doing this, y? You should do that."

He always likes to talk some shit:" w. "Why are you doing this, you should do that."

some shit like this with a mad face.


some shit likeHe always says this with a mad face.

Always some shit like thisat with a mad face.

You know, he always keep smiling to his leaders but always mad to me.


You know, he always keep smiling to his leaderbosses but is always mad ato me.

You know, he always keep smiling to his leadersHe always smiles at his bosses, but is always mad ato me.

i wouldn't use "always" so many times in a row, but since this paragraph is very casual i think it's alright.

This kind of person is really hated.


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