July 25, 2022
A Dream of Splendor (2)
Fate brought these three women together, and this “invincible trio” made their way through life and realized their Eastern Capital dream. The three sisters first "punished" Ouyang Xu for his repentance and then successfully ran the Half-Veiled teahouse and Yong-an restaurant Wing. Zhao Pan'er and Gu Qianfan, the Commander of the Intelligence Agency at the Capital Security Office (also known as “Living Devil”), ended up together happily after thousands of difficulties while Sun Sanniang found true love with Scholar Du — they were happily married, and her son finally accepted her. Song Yinzhang also managed to get out of her abusive relationship with Shen Ruzhuo in the end. Women’s love and career are hot topics in both the Northern Song Dynasty and the present era. The story of the three sisters, whose life story spanned from civil society, jianghu (the martial world), to the royal circle, is very watchable thanks to the delicate narrative.
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A Dream of Splendor (2)
Fate brought these three women together, and this “invincible trio” made their way through life and realized their Eastern Capital dream.
The three sisters first "punished" Ouyang Xu for his unrepentance and then successfully ran the Half-Veiled tTeahouse and Yong-an restaurant Wing.
Usually people get punished because they won't repent. That's why it should be the word, "unrepentance." Ouyang Xu didn't apologize or hold himself accountable for his behavior.
Zhao Pan'er and Gu Qianfan, the Commander of the Intelligence Agency at the Capital Security Office (also known as “Living Devil”), ended up happily together happily after thousands of difficulties while Sun Sanniang found true love with Scholar Du — they were happily married, and her son finally accepted her.
In the end, Song Yinzhang also managed to get out of her abusive relationship with Shen Ruzhuo in the end.
Women’sThe loves and careers of women are hot topics in both the Northern Song Dynasty and the present era.
The story of the three sisters, whose life storyies spanned from civil society, jianghu (the martial world), to and the royal circle, is very watchenjoyable thanks to the delicate narrative.
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Fate brought these three women together, and this “invincible trio” made their way through life and realizachieved their Eastern Capital dream.
"Realized" can also work here, but it makes me think more of "understood" instead of "successively accomplished".
The three sisters first "punished" Ouyang Xu for his repentancepast behavior and then successfully ran the Half-Veiled teahouse and Yong-an restaurant Wing.
Repentance means "feeling guilt/regret for your past wrongdoings", as opposed to just "past wrongdoings".
Zhao Pan'er and Gu Qianfan, the Commander of the Intelligence Agency at the Capital Security Office (also known as “Living Devil”), ended up together happily after thousands of difficulties while. Sun Sanniang found true love with Scholar Du — they were happily married, and her son finally accepted her.
Just broke it up into 2 sentences.
Women’s love and careerThe love lives and careers of women are hot topics in both the Northern Song Dynasty and the present era.
The story of the three sisters, whose life story spanned from civil society, jianghu (the martial world), to the royal circle, is a very enjoyable watchable thanks to the delintricate narrative.
"Delicate" makes me think more of fragile, I think intricate is a better word here.
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Fate brought these three women together, and this “invincible trio” made their way through life and realized their Eastern Capital dream. Fate brought these three women together, and this “invincible trio” made their way through life and "Realized" can also work here, but it makes me think more of "understood" instead of "successively accomplished". This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The three sisters first "punished" Ouyang Xu for his repentance and then successfully ran the Half-Veiled teahouse and Yong-an restaurant Wing. The three sisters first "punished" Ouyang Xu for his Repentance means "feeling guilt/regret for your past wrongdoings", as opposed to just "past wrongdoings". The three sisters first "punished" Ouyang Xu for his unrepentance and then successfully ran the Half-Veiled Usually people get punished because they won't repent. That's why it should be the word, "unrepentance." Ouyang Xu didn't apologize or hold himself accountable for his behavior. |
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Zhao Pan'er and Gu Qianfan, the Commander of the Intelligence Agency at the Capital Security Office (also known as “Living Devil”), ended up together happily after thousands of difficulties while Sun Sanniang found true love with Scholar Du — they were happily married, and her son finally accepted her. Zhao Pan'er and Gu Qianfan, the Commander of the Intelligence Agency at the Capital Security Office (also known as “Living Devil”), ended up together happily after thousands of difficulties Just broke it up into 2 sentences. Zhao Pan'er and Gu Qianfan, the Commander of the Intelligence Agency at the Capital Security Office (also known as “Living Devil”), ended up happily together |
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Song Yinzhang also managed to get out of her abusive relationship with Shen Ruzhuo in the end. In the end, Song Yinzhang also managed to get out of her abusive relationship with Shen Ruzhuo |
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Women’s love and career are hot topics in both the Northern Song Dynasty and the present era.
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The story of the three sisters, whose life story spanned from civil society, jianghu (the martial world), to the royal circle, is very watchable thanks to the delicate narrative. The story of the three sisters, whose life story spanned from civil society, jianghu (the martial world), to the royal circle, is a very enjoyable watch "Delicate" makes me think more of fragile, I think intricate is a better word here. The story of the three sisters, whose life stor |
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