Aug. 21, 2024
A Dramatic Story
Many years ago, I worked for a precious metal products company as an e-commerce manager. It was a nice company, not with a high salary, but also not with high stress.
One day, a coworker on my team asked me if her husband was on my WeChat friends list. Then we found the account on my WeChat. That was my work WeChat, so I had passed many friend requests from strangers.
The dramatic thing was that this coworker told me it was her using her husband's account and adding my account. I was so confused but thought there was nothing about work, so I just let it go.
A few days later, another coworker told me a piece of gossip news about this coworker on my team. Then I finally got the point: she had just tried to warn me not to tell her husband the gossip.
But I didn't know her gossip at the time, and I wasn't interested in telling her husband anything.
Maybe every dramatic and weird story has a logical storyline. Only the part that you are missing makes you think it's dramatic and weird.
多年前，我在一家贵金属制品公司担任电子商务经理。那是一家不错的公司，薪水不高，但压力也不大。
一天，我团队的一位同事问我，她丈夫是否在我的微信好友列表中。然后我们在我的微信上找到了这个账号。那是我的工作微信，所以我通过了很多陌生人的好友请求。
最戏剧性的是，这个同事告诉我是她在用她老公的账号，并加了我的好友。我很困惑，但我觉得工作无关紧要，就随它去了。
几天后，另一位同事告诉了我一个关于她的八卦新闻。然后我终于明白了：她只是试图警告我不要把这些八卦告诉她丈夫。
但我当时不知道她的八卦，也没兴趣告诉她丈夫任何事。
可能每个戏剧性和怪异的故事都有一个合乎逻辑的故事情节。只是你错过的那部分让你觉得它很戏剧性和奇怪。
A Dramatic Story
Many years ago, I worked for a precious metal products company as an e-commerce manager.
It was a nice company, not with a high salary, but also not with high stress.
One day, a coworker on my team asked me if her husband was on my WeChat friends list.
Then we found the account on my WeChat.
That was my work WeChat, so I had passed many friend requests from strangers.
The dramatic thing was that this coworker told me it was her using her husband's account and adding my account.
I was so confused but thought there was nothing about work, so I just let it go.
A few days later, another coworker told me a piece of gossip news about this coworker on my team.
Then I finally got the point: she had just tried to warn me not to tell her husband the gossip.
But I didn't know her gossip at the time, and I wasn't interested in telling her husband anything.
Maybe every dramatic and weird story has a logical storyline.
Only the part that you are missing makes you think it's dramatic and weird.
Many years ago, I worked for a precious metal products company as an e-commerce manager.
It was a nice company, not with a - it didn't offer high salaryies, but also not withwasn't highly stressful.
Or "a high-pressure environment".
One day, a coworker on my team asked me if her husband was on my WeChat friends list.
Then we found the account on my WeChat.
That was my work WeChat, so I had passaccepted many friend requests from strangers.
I wasn't clear if you said yes or no to the requests - accepted or declined/rejected
The dramatic thing was that this coworker told me it was her using her husband's account and adding my account.
I was so confused but thought thereis was nothing aboutto do with work, so I just let it go.
A few days later, another coworker told me a piece of gossip news about this coworker on my team.
"gossip" or "news", not both
Then I finally got the point: she had just tried to warn me not to tell her husband the gossip.
But I didn't know her gossip at the time, and I wasn't interested in telling her husband anything.
Maybe every dramatic and weird story has a logical storyline.
OIt's only the part that you are missing that makes you think it's dramatic and weird.
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Well written, good job!
Aug. 22, 2024
Thank you so much! Your words have inspired me a lot!
A Dramatic Story
Many years ago, I worked for a precious metal products company as an e-commerce manager.
It was a nice company, not with a high salary, but also not with high. The salary wasn't high, but neither was the stress.
This is a more natural-sounding way of saying this.
One day, a coworker on my team asked me if her husband was on my WeChat friends list.
Then we found the account on my WeChat.
That was my work WeChat, so I had passed many friend requests from strangers.
I'm not sure what you mean by "passed" here. Do you mean "received" or something else?
The dramatic thing was that this coworker told me itshe was her using her husband's account and adding my account.
I was so confused but thought there was nothing aboutit had nothing to do with work, so I just let it go.
A few days later, another coworker told me a piece ofsome gossip news about this coworker on my team.
Then I finally got the point: she had just tried to warn me not to tell her husband the gossip.
But I didn't know her gossipabout it at the time, and I wasn't interested in telling her husband anything.
Maybe every dramatic and weird story has a logical storyline.
Only the part that you are missing makes you think it's dramatic and weird.
Aug. 21, 2024
Thank you so much!
May I ask what you would say when you receive a friend request and accept it?
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