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adichira

June 27, 2025

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A Dramatic and Gossip Show

Hello, good evening!

I have been watching a controversial show since a few years ago. I discovered it watching TV, it was broadcast in a channel called Discovery Home & Health. Its name is "90 day fiancé", I loved it. I started watching it in Spanish, but now, I'm studying by watching it in English. I enjoy the dramatic stories, even though I know they are fake. My husband told me that it isn't a good show for me because I'm learning bad words too hahaha.

I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity. I need to put my entire attention to understand the whole gossip hahahha.

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A Dramatic and Gossip Show

Hello, good evening!

I have been watching a controversial show sincefor a few years ago.

I discovered it while watching TV, it was broadcast in a channel called Discovery Home & Health.

Its name is "90 dDay fFiancé"," I loved it.

I started watching it in Spanish, but now, I'm studying by watching it in English.

I enjoy the dramatic stories, even though I know they are fake.

My husband told me that it isn't a good show for me because I'm learning bad words too hahaha.

I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity.

I need to put/give my entire attention to understand the whole gossip hahahha.

A Dramatic and GossipReality Show

"Gossip" doesn't work as an adjective. But if you want to use it, you could use this alternative: A Dramatic Show With a Lot of Gossip
In general, it's common for reality shows to have a lot of gossip - so this would already be implied.

Hello, good evening!

I have been watching a controversial show since afor few years ago.

I have been X for # years => you are describing an ongoing habit and when you started
I did X # years ago => you are describing an activity you did at a certain time in the past, and it is implied you no longer do this activity

Your original sentence is combining these structures, but they mean different things

I discovered it when I was watching TV, it was broadcast ion a channel called Discovery Home & Health.

We say shows are "on" TV or "on" a channel

It's name iscalled "90 dDay fFiancé"," and I loved it.

You are referring to the show by its name, so it needs to be capitalized

I started watching it in Spanish, but now, I'm studying by watching it in English.

A more natural alternative => I started watching it in Spanish, but now I'm watching it in English as part of my studying.

I enjoy the dramatic stories, even though I know they are fake.

My husband told me that it isn't a good show for me because I'm learning bad words too, hahaha.

Learning bad words is important if you want to understand when natives speak ;)

I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity.

I need to put my entire attention on it to understand the wholall of the gossip, hahahha.

Feedback

I understand - this show is a guilty pleasure of mine! I was also watching it as part of my language studies. I only saw a couple of episodes, but it was really entertaining xD

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adichira

June 27, 2025

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Hi! Thank you for your corrections. I appreciate it. Your opinion give me a support, because I'm not the unique person that loves this show hahaha.

Its name is "90 day fiancé", I loved it.


It's name iscalled "90 dDay fFiancé"," and I loved it.

You are referring to the show by its name, so it needs to be capitalized

Its name is "90 dDay fFiancé"," I loved it.

I started watching it in Spanish, but now, I'm studying by watching it in English.


I started watching it in Spanish, but now, I'm studying by watching it in English.

A more natural alternative => I started watching it in Spanish, but now I'm watching it in English as part of my studying.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I enjoy the dramatic stories, even though I know they are fake.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My husband told me that it isn't a good show for me because I'm learning bad words too hahaha.


My husband told me that it isn't a good show for me because I'm learning bad words too, hahaha.

Learning bad words is important if you want to understand when natives speak ;)

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity.


I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity.

I can't watching it while I'm doing another activity.

I need to put my entire attention to understand the whole gossip hahahha.


I need to put my entire attention on it to understand the wholall of the gossip, hahahha.

I need to put/give my entire attention to understand the whole gossip hahahha.

A Dramatic and Gossip Show


A Dramatic and GossipReality Show

"Gossip" doesn't work as an adjective. But if you want to use it, you could use this alternative: A Dramatic Show With a Lot of Gossip In general, it's common for reality shows to have a lot of gossip - so this would already be implied.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Hello, good evening!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have been watching a controversial show since a few years ago.


I have been watching a controversial show since afor few years ago.

I have been X for # years => you are describing an ongoing habit and when you started I did X # years ago => you are describing an activity you did at a certain time in the past, and it is implied you no longer do this activity Your original sentence is combining these structures, but they mean different things

I have been watching a controversial show sincefor a few years ago.

I discovered it watching TV, it was broadcast in a channel called Discovery Home & Health.


I discovered it when I was watching TV, it was broadcast ion a channel called Discovery Home & Health.

We say shows are "on" TV or "on" a channel

I discovered it while watching TV, it was broadcast in a channel called Discovery Home & Health.

I had been watching a controversial show since a few years ago.


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