April 6, 2023
A Discussion Message
I don’t agree with the master. A young lady wearing low-cut clothing just wants to show her beauty because she loves beauty. But she is not brave enough to show her beauty.
She is afraid that others will say bad words to her, so sometimes she covers her breast with her hands.
However, if some women wearing low-cut clothing really have the idea the master said, it will be terrible. I guess only a few percent of the women might have that kind of thought.
(The story goes:
in a temple, one day, a little monk asked his master, “Master, you see, those benefactress always wear low-cut clothing, but they often cover their breasts with their hands, why ?”
The master thought this for a while and slowly said to the younger monk, “they are afraid that rich people can’t see them, and poor people can see them.)
A Discussion Message
I don’t agree with the master.
A young lady wearing low-cut clothing just wants to show her beauty because she loves beauty.
ButHowever, she is not brave enough to show her beauty.
Typically it's not good practice to start a sentence with 'But'. It sounds better to say: 'However, she is not brave...'.
She is afraid that others will say bad words to her, so sometimes she covers her breast with her hands.
However, if some women wearing low-cut clothing really have thean idea what the master has said, it willould be terrible.
I guess only a few percent of the women might have that kind of thought.
It sounds more natural without the 'the'
(The story goes:
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in a temple, one day, a little monk asked his master, “Master, you see, those benefactress always wear low-cut clothing, but they often cover their breasts with their hands, why ?”
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The master thought this for a while and slowly said to the younger monk, “they are afraid that rich people can’t see them, and poor people can see them.)
April 8, 2023
Thank you very much!
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A Discussion Message This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I don’t agree with the master. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A young lady wearing low-cut clothing just wants to show her beauty because she loves beauty. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But she is not brave enough to show her beauty.
Typically it's not good practice to start a sentence with 'But'. It sounds better to say: 'However, she is not brave...'. |
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She is afraid that others will say bad words to her, so sometimes she covers her breast with her hands. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, if some women wearing low-cut clothing really have the idea the master said, it will be terrible. However, if some women wearing low-cut clothing really have |
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I guess only a few percent of the women might have that kind of thought. I guess only a few percent of It sounds more natural without the 'the' |
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(The story goes: in a temple, one day, a little monk asked his master, “Master, you see, those benefactress always wear low-cut clothing, but they often cover their breasts with their hands, why ?” The master thought this for a while and slowly said to the younger monk, “they are afraid that rich people can’t see them, and poor people can see them.) (The story goes: |
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