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Jack

April 4, 2022

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Speaking of Hou Dejian, it reminds me of 1989.

Back then, I was just transferred to the city where I now live.

My workplace was somewhat far away from the city, so I had to buy daily necessities going to the city.

One day, I rode back to my work unit after buying some vegetables. When I rode through Qinghe Road from east to the west, I saw a parade ahead of me.

They shouted slogans and held signs while they walked in the center of the road. Cars and pedestrians all made way for them.

The parade was divided into two parts: the front team was students, and the back team was teachers. They were from a local university.

I watched them a little while before I rode ahead of them. After that, I rode back to my workplace straight away.

In the last half of May that year, the situation in China became extremely severe. I watched TV every day just wanting to know how things would go.

I still remember a lot of things that happened at that special time.

Because that incident is so sensitive to CN, I don't want to say more, so stop here.

Corrections

Back then, I washad just transferred to the city where I now live.

Using "was" isn't wrong but it's more common to use "had" in this case.

My workplace was somewhat far away from the city, so I had to buy daily necessities going toinside the city.

One day, I rode backeturned to my work unitplace after buying some vegetables.

When I rodepassed through Qinghe Road from east to the westgoing westward, I saw a parade ahead of me.

The parade was divided into two parts: the front team was students, and the back team was teachersstudents in the front and teachers in the back.

I watched them a littlefor a while before I rode ahead ofpassing them by.

After that, I rodewent straight back to my workplace straight away.

In the lastter half of May that year, the situation in China became extremely severe.

I watched TV every day just, wanting to know how things would goturn out.

I still remember a lot of things that happened atduring that special time.

Because that incident is sovery sensitive to CNin China, I don't want to say any more, so let's stop here.

Jack's avatar
Jack

April 4, 2022

5

Thank you very much.

Speaking of Hou Dejian, it reminds me of 1989.

Back then, I had just transferred to the city where I now live.

My workplace was somewhat far away, so I had to buy daily necessities inside the city.

One day, I returned to my workplace after buying some vegetables. When I passed through Qinghe Road going westward, I saw a parade ahead of me.

They shouted slogans and held signs while they walked in the center of the road. Cars and pedestrians all made way for them.

The parade was divided into two parts: students in the front and teachers in the back.

I watched them for a while before passing them by. After that, I went straight back to my workplace.

In the latter half of May that year, the situation in China became extremely severe. I watched TV every day, wanting to know how things would turn out.

I still remember a lot of things that happened during that special time. Because that incident is very sensitive in China, I don't want to say anymore, so let’s stop here.

After that, I rode back to my workplace straight away.


After that, I rodewent straight back to my workplace straight away.

A Discussion


Speaking of Hou Dejian, it reminds me of 1989.


Back then, I was just transferred to the city where I now live.


Back then, I washad just transferred to the city where I now live.

Using "was" isn't wrong but it's more common to use "had" in this case.

My workplace was somewhat far away from the city, so I had to buy daily necessities going to the city.


My workplace was somewhat far away from the city, so I had to buy daily necessities going toinside the city.

One day, I rode back to my work unit after buying some vegetables.


One day, I rode backeturned to my work unitplace after buying some vegetables.

When I rode through Qinghe Road from east to the west, I saw a parade ahead of me.


When I rodepassed through Qinghe Road from east to the westgoing westward, I saw a parade ahead of me.

They shouted slogans and held signs while they walked in the center of the road.


Cars and pedestrians all made way for them.


The parade was divided into two parts: the front team was students, and the back team was teachers.


The parade was divided into two parts: the front team was students, and the back team was teachersstudents in the front and teachers in the back.

They were from a local university.


I watched them a little while before I rode ahead of them.


I watched them a littlefor a while before I rode ahead ofpassing them by.

In the last half of May that year, the situation in China became extremely severe.


In the lastter half of May that year, the situation in China became extremely severe.

I watched TV every day just wanting to know how things would go.


I watched TV every day just, wanting to know how things would goturn out.

I still remember a lot of things that happened at that special time.


I still remember a lot of things that happened atduring that special time.

Because that incident is so sensitive to CN, I don't want to say more, so stop here.


Because that incident is sovery sensitive to CNin China, I don't want to say any more, so let's stop here.

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