March 29, 2022
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I still remember the day chairman Mao died. I was helping my mom to do some farm work in a piece of cotton field, when one of my cousins came to us and told us about it. We were shocked at the moment because we never thought he would die. We were very scared and didn't dare say anything. We just kept in silence, dared not to tell others. My grandma's (my mom's side) family was ranked Funong, so we had lower status than ordinary people. No matter how other people treated us, we had to put up with them, never dared to act back. A few days later, every administrative village held a memorial meeting. The majority of adults attended. I heard that people cried heavily.
I still remember the day chairman Mao died.
I was helping my mom to do some farm work in a piece of cotton field, when one of my cousins came to us and told us about it.
We were shocked at the moment because we never thought he would die.
We were very scared and didn't dare say anything.
We just kept in silence,t, and dared not to tell others.
My grandma's (my mom's side) family was ranked Funong, so we had lower status than ordinary people.
No matter how other people treated us, we had to put up with them, never dared to act back.
A few days later, every administrative village held a memorial meeting.
The majority of adults attended.
I heard that people cried heavily.
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March 29, 2022
Thank you very much.
I still remember the day cChairman Mao died.
I was helping my mom to dowith some farm work in a piece of cotton field, when one of my cousins came to us and told us about it.
In Chinese, everything has a measure word - 一片土地，一头牛, etc. but in English many words don't have that: "a field", "a cow."
We just kept in silence,t. We dared not to tell others.
My grandma's (family (on my mom's side) family was rankedwas classified as Funong, so we had lower status than ordinary people.
Could also be "My grandma's family, on my mom's side, was..."
No matter how other people treated us, we had to put up with them,it. We never dared to act backretaliate.
March 29, 2022
Thank you very much.
March 29, 2022
I was helping my mom to dowith some farm work in a piece of cotton field, when one of my cousins came to us and told us about it.
Was helping my mom with some farm work / in a cotton field / came and told us
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We just kept in silence,t. We dared not to tell others.
Kept silent / dare not tell others
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My grandma's (family (on my mom's side) family was rankedwas classified as Funong, so we had lower status than ordinary people.
Was classified as
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My grandma family, on my mom”s side
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No matter how other people treated us, we had to put up with them,it. We never dared to act backretaliate.
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I was helping my mom to do some farm work in a piece of cotton field, when one of my cousins came to us and told us about it. I was helping my mom In Chinese, everything has a measure word - 一片土地，一头牛, etc. but in English many words don't have that: "a field", "a cow." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were shocked at the moment because we never thought he would die. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We were very scared and didn't dare say anything. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We just kept in silence, dared not to tell others. We just kept We just kept |
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My grandma's (my mom's side) family was ranked Funong, so we had lower status than ordinary people. My grandma's Could also be "My grandma's family, on my mom's side, was..." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A few days later, every administrative village held a memorial meeting. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The majority of adults attended. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I heard that people cried heavily. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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