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Jack

March 29, 2022

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Speaking of the Three Years of Nature Disaster(in fact, it was a man-made disaster from my point of view), I heard something about it from my mom.

People ate people was true. The starving people ate the dead secretly.
Half the families in my village were extinct because of hunger.

At that time, the whole villagers ate together, like we ate in school. They were not allowed to cook by themselves at their own home.

I asked my mom if there was not enough food to keep people alive. My mom said no. Although there was not enough food, that wouldn't lead people to die.

The leader of the village falsely reported crop yields, so there was no food left for villagers. That was why many people died from hunger.

I also learned that people all had body edema before they died from hunger. Anyway, it was a miserable history. We should not let it happen again.

Corrections

People really ate people was true.

Was true feels awkward. You could say "It was true that people ate people,"

The starving people ate the dead secretly.

Half the families in my village werent extinct because of hunger.

They were not allowed to cook by themselves atin their own home.

My mom said no.

The leader of the village falsely reported crop yields, so there was no food left for the villagers.

That was why many people died from hunger.

We should not let it happen again.

Jack's avatar
Jack

March 29, 2022

5

Thank you very much

A Discussion


Speaking of the Three Years of Nature Disaster(in fact, it was a man-made disaster from my point of view), I heard something about it from my mom.


People ate people was true.


People really ate people was true.

Was true feels awkward. You could say "It was true that people ate people,"

The starving people ate the dead secretly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Half the families in my village were extinct because of hunger.


Half the families in my village werent extinct because of hunger.

At that time, the whole villagers ate together, like we ate in school.


They were not allowed to cook by themselves at their own home.


They were not allowed to cook by themselves atin their own home.

I asked my mom if there was not enough food to keep people alive.


My mom said no.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Although there was not enough food, that wouldn't lead people to die.


The leader of the village falsely reported crop yields, so there was no food left for villagers.


The leader of the village falsely reported crop yields, so there was no food left for the villagers.

That was why many people died from hunger.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I also learned that people all had body edema before they died from hunger.


Anyway, it was a miserable history.


We should not let it happen again.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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