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A discursive essay

Should women be promoted to top jobs in business and politics before men?

The difference proportion of women against men in top positions in the economy and politics is a major problem in a society that claims to be a democracy. In response, many feminist groups have attempted to rise politics that provides gender quotas. However, is this a good solution?

Norway, as in many other aspects, have a lot of experience in terms of gender equality. They tried to put a minimum of women in the parliament as well as in directive positions. The consequence was that the number of women rose, but in fact, the politics concerned with equality kept untouched.

On the contrary, they have needed the same number of demonstrations and social work as before. A possible reason for this is that the women who finally got the power wasn’t representative of the majority of the work class women. Therefore, they kept the same conservative politics.

A bigger issue related to this is, that maybe this could be a solution between women and men, but not a solution to minorities because they represent a minimum of the population, but they deserve their rights as well.

In conclusion, the problem of fair political representation in the actual political system requires more than just simple gender quotas. It requires a radical change of the system itself.

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The differenceing proportion of women against men in top positions in the economy and politics is a major problem in a society that claims to be a democracy.

I might say, "The lack of women and men..." to make your point more explicit.

In response, many feminist groups have attempted to riscreate politiccies that provides gender quotas.

Norway, as inwith many other aspects, haves a lot of experience in terms of gender equality.

They tried to put a minimum number of women in the parliament as well as in dirnd other executive positions.

The consequence was that the number of women rose, but in fact, the politics concerned with equality keptwere untouched.

or "remained the same"

On the contrarAdditionally, they have needed the same number of demonstrations and social work as before.

A possible reason for this is that the women who finally got the power wasn’eren't representative of the majority of the working class women.

A bigger issue related to this is, that maybe this could be a solution between women and men, but not a solution tofor minorities because t. They represent a minimum of the population, but they deserve their rights as well.

In conclusion, the problem of fair political representation in the actual political system requires more than just simple gender quotas.

A discursive essay


Should women be promoted to top jobs in business and politics before men?


The difference proportion of women against men in top positions in the economy and politics is a major problem in a society that claims to be a democracy.


The differenceing proportion of women against men in top positions in the economy and politics is a major problem in a society that claims to be a democracy.

I might say, "The lack of women and men..." to make your point more explicit.

In response, many feminist groups have attempted to rise politics that provides gender quotas.


In response, many feminist groups have attempted to riscreate politiccies that provides gender quotas.

However, is this a good solution?


Norway, as in many other aspects, have a lot of experience in terms of gender equality.


Norway, as inwith many other aspects, haves a lot of experience in terms of gender equality.

They tried to put a minimum of women in the parliament as well as in directive positions.


They tried to put a minimum number of women in the parliament as well as in dirnd other executive positions.

The consequence was that the number of women rose, but in fact, the politics concerned with equality kept untouched.


The consequence was that the number of women rose, but in fact, the politics concerned with equality keptwere untouched.

or "remained the same"

On the contrary, they have needed the same number of demonstrations and social work as before.


On the contrarAdditionally, they have needed the same number of demonstrations and social work as before.

A possible reason for this is that the women who finally got the power wasn’t representative of the majority of the work class women.


A possible reason for this is that the women who finally got the power wasn’eren't representative of the majority of the working class women.

Therefore, they kept the same conservative politics.


A bigger issue related to this is, that maybe this could be a solution between women and men, but not a solution to minorities because they represent a minimum of the population, but they deserve their rights as well.


A bigger issue related to this is, that maybe this could be a solution between women and men, but not a solution tofor minorities because t. They represent a minimum of the population, but they deserve their rights as well.

In conclusion, the problem of fair political representation in the actual political system requires more than just simple gender quotas.


In conclusion, the problem of fair political representation in the actual political system requires more than just simple gender quotas.

It requires a radical change of the system itself.


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