Nov. 2, 2022
If I would have a dinner with a famous person I would like to do it with a famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.
She is very clever, open-minded and well-read person. She interprets what's happening in the world. And she does it in calm and eloquent way. I enjoy reading her channel.
She discuss not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature. She has tree children as I have. And now she lives in Germany. I have a special relationship with this country.
So, if I would have a chance to meet her I would definitely do it.
If I wouldever have the opportunity to have a dinner with a famous person, I would like to do it with a famous sociologist by the name of Ekaterina Shulman.
She is a very clever, open-minded and well-read person.
She interprets what's happening in the worldcurrent affairs.
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I enjoy readwatching her channel.
I assume by "channel", you are talking about a YouTube channel?
She discusses not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.
SLike me, she has three children as I have.
And nNow, she lives in Germany.
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If I wcould have a dinner with a famous person, I would like to do it with athe famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.
She interprets what's happening in the world, and she does it in a calm and eloquent way.
more natural to combine with next sentence
And she does it in calm and eloquent way.
I enjoy readwatching her channel.
or if you are talking about telegram: reading her Telegram channel
but usually channel implies tv or youtube
She discusses not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.
SLike me, she has three children as I have.
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She has tree children as I have.
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And now she lives in Germany.
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I have a special relationship with this country. |
So, if I would have a chance to meet her I would definitely do it. |
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