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polina

Nov. 2, 2022

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A dinner with a famous person

If I would have a dinner with a famous person I would like to do it with a famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.

She is very clever, open-minded and well-read person. She interprets what's happening in the world. And she does it in calm and eloquent way. I enjoy reading her channel.

She discuss not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature. She has tree children as I have. And now she lives in Germany. I have a special relationship with this country.

So, if I would have a chance to meet her I would definitely do it.

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If I wouldever have the opportunity to have a dinner with a famous person, I would like to do it with a famous sociologist by the name of Ekaterina Shulman.

She is a very clever, open-minded and well-read person.

She interprets what's happening in the worldcurrent affairs.

AndMoreover, she does it in calm and eloquent way.

Refrain from using "and" at the start of a sentence

I enjoy readwatching her channel.

I assume by "channel", you are talking about a YouTube channel?

She discusses not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.

SLike me, she has three children as I have.

And nNow, she lives in Germany.

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Watch out for spelling errors because they can change the meaning of your sentences completely (three vs tree...) 😄

If I wcould have a dinner with a famous person, I would like to do it with athe famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.

She interprets what's happening in the world, and she does it in a calm and eloquent way.

more natural to combine with next sentence

And she does it in calm and eloquent way.

I enjoy readwatching her channel.

or if you are talking about telegram: reading her Telegram channel

but usually channel implies tv or youtube

She discusses not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.

SLike me, she has three children as I have.

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polina

Nov. 2, 2022

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I enjoy readwatching her channel.

Thank you! Yes, I mean TG

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polina

Nov. 2, 2022

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Thank you ❤️

A dinner with a famous person


If I would have a dinner with a famous person I would like to do it with a famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.


If I wcould have a dinner with a famous person, I would like to do it with athe famous sociologist Ekaterina Shulman.

If I wouldever have the opportunity to have a dinner with a famous person, I would like to do it with a famous sociologist by the name of Ekaterina Shulman.

She is very clever, open-minded and well-read person.


She is a very clever, open-minded and well-read person.

She interprets what's happening in the world.


She interprets what's happening in the world, and she does it in a calm and eloquent way.

more natural to combine with next sentence

She interprets what's happening in the worldcurrent affairs.

And she does it in calm and eloquent way.


And she does it in calm and eloquent way.

AndMoreover, she does it in calm and eloquent way.

Refrain from using "and" at the start of a sentence

I enjoy reading her channel.


I enjoy readwatching her channel.

or if you are talking about telegram: reading her Telegram channel but usually channel implies tv or youtube

I enjoy readwatching her channel.

I assume by "channel", you are talking about a YouTube channel?

She discuss not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.


She discusses not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.

She discusses not only political science, but also classic and contemporary literature.

She has tree children as I have.


SLike me, she has three children as I have.

SLike me, she has three children as I have.

And now she lives in Germany.


And nNow, she lives in Germany.

I have a special relationship with this country.


So, if I would have a chance to meet her I would definitely do it.


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