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zaozao

Nov. 7, 2022

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A diary written yesterday

I stayed up late last night just for watching short videos about XuSong, a famous singer in China, through Bilibili (one of the most popular video websites in China). I felt so regretted that I didn’t write my diary timely and waste a lot of time. It hurts my eyes a lot cuz the light was too faint at the night. I just couldn’t t stop scrolling through the screen even though I didn’t find something that attracted me too much.

Is this app full of magic? Then why my eyes could not move away from the screen? Reflecting on myself, perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that make me do this kind of useless and repeated thing.

I promise to finish every day’s tasks first, then have a little rest. Try to have a real life conversation with friends to clear my head.

When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, watch a spoken practicing course, memory new vocabulary and listen to the interpreting course. How busy should I have been. However I didn’t take it seriously, as if it’s not a big deal for me. Only if the examination of CET 6 is around the corner will I fully concentrated on studying.

Super thank you for corrections.

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I stayed up late last night just for watching short videos about XuSong, a famous singer in China, through Bilibili (one of the most popular video websites in China).

I felt so regrettedful that I didn’t write my diary timely and wasted a lot of time.

It hurts mMy eyes hurt a lot cuz the light was toso faint at the night.

Then why my eyes could notcouldn't my eyes move away from the screen?

Reflecting on myself, perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that makes me do this kind of useless and repeatedtitive thing.

When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, watch a spoken practicing course, memoryized new vocabulary, and listen to the interpreting course.

How busyI should I have been so busy.

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zaozao

Nov. 8, 2022

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It hurts mMy eyes hurt a lot cuz the light was toso faint at the night.

Thank you for correcting this! This expression of “my eyes hurt” is better, I will remember this for a long time! :)

A diary written yesterday

I felt so regrettedful that I didn’t write my diary on timely and waste a lot ofso much time.

It hurts my eyes a lot cuzbecause the light was too faint at the night.

"cuz" is very colloquial; you can use it in informal settings like when texting your friends

I just couldn’t t stop scrolling through the screen even though I didn’t find someanything that attractentertained me too much.

Is this app full of magic?

Then why my eyes could not move away fromcouldn't I take my eyes off the screen?

"couldn't take my eyes off..." is a set expression

Reflecting on myself,After some reflection, I realized that perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that makes me do this kind of useless and repetatived thing.

I promise to finish every day’s tasks first, then have a little rest.

Try to have a real life conversation with friends to clear my head.

When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, which was to watch a spoken practicing course, memoryize new vocabulary and listen to the interpreting course.

How busy I should I have been.

However I didn’t take it seriously, as if it’s not a were no big deal for me.

Only if the examination of CET 6 is around the corner will I fully concentrated on studyingI will fully concentrate on studying only when the CET 6 exam is right around the corner.

Super thank you for corrections.

A diary written yesterday


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I stayed up late last night just for watching short videos about XuSong, a famous singer in China, through Bilibili (one of the most popular video websites in China).


I stayed up late last night just for watching short videos about XuSong, a famous singer in China, through Bilibili (one of the most popular video websites in China).

I felt so regretted that I didn’t write my diary timely and waste a lot of time.


I felt so regrettedful that I didn’t write my diary on timely and waste a lot ofso much time.

I felt so regrettedful that I didn’t write my diary timely and wasted a lot of time.

It hurts my eyes a lot cuz the light was too faint at the night.


It hurts my eyes a lot cuzbecause the light was too faint at the night.

"cuz" is very colloquial; you can use it in informal settings like when texting your friends

It hurts mMy eyes hurt a lot cuz the light was toso faint at the night.

I just couldn’t t stop scrolling through the screen even though I didn’t find something that attracted me too much.


I just couldn’t t stop scrolling through the screen even though I didn’t find someanything that attractentertained me too much.

Is this app full of magic?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then why my eyes could not move away from the screen?


Then why my eyes could not move away fromcouldn't I take my eyes off the screen?

"couldn't take my eyes off..." is a set expression

Then why my eyes could notcouldn't my eyes move away from the screen?

Reflecting on myself, perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that make me do this kind of useless and repeated thing.


Reflecting on myself,After some reflection, I realized that perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that makes me do this kind of useless and repetatived thing.

Reflecting on myself, perhaps it is the feeling of boredom that makes me do this kind of useless and repeatedtitive thing.

I promise to finish every day’s tasks first, then have a little rest.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Try to have a real life conversation with friends to clear my head.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, watch a spoken practicing course, memory new vocabulary and listen to the interpreting course.


When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, which was to watch a spoken practicing course, memoryize new vocabulary and listen to the interpreting course.

When I went to the bed, I suddenly remembered my unfinished work, watch a spoken practicing course, memoryized new vocabulary, and listen to the interpreting course.

How busy should I have been.


How busy I should I have been.

How busyI should I have been so busy.

However I didn’t take it seriously, as if it’s not a big deal for me.


However I didn’t take it seriously, as if it’s not a were no big deal for me.

Only if the examination of CET 6 is around the corner will I fully concentrated on studying.


Only if the examination of CET 6 is around the corner will I fully concentrated on studyingI will fully concentrate on studying only when the CET 6 exam is right around the corner.

Super thank you for corrections.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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