Yesterday, I went to the Cainiao Yizhan, a package drop-off point where people put all of their parcels people bought from online shopping, to get my parcel of a set of calligraphy tools which contains a writing brush, a bottle of tusche and a stack of rice paper. Yesterday, I went to the Cainiao Yizhan, a package drop-off point where people put all of their parcels bought online, to get my parcel of a set of calligraphy tools which contains a writing brush, a bottle of tusche and a stack of rice paper.

Yesterday I went to the Cainiao Yizhan, a package drop-off point where put all of the parcels people bought from online shopping,bought by people online are kept. I wanted to get my parcel of a set of calligraphy tools which contains a writing brush, a bottle of tusche and a stack of rice paper. Yesterday I went to the Cainiao Yizhan, a package drop-off point where all the parcels bought by people online are kept. I wanted to get my parcel of a set of calligraphy tools which contains a writing brush, a bottle of tusche and a stack of rice paper.

It’s a very long sentence so I broke it into two.

A reasonable excuse is that I keput my tools of calligraphy at home, but I am in school now. A reasonable excuse is that I kept my tools of calligraphy at home, but I am in school now.

After unwrapping the package I started to write kaishu, namelywhich is regular script. After unwrapping the package I started to write kaishu, which is regular script.

However I couldn’t get a feeling of writing this kind of script any more. However I couldn’t get a feeling of writing this kind of script anymore.

Anymore - adverb

However I couldn’t get a feeling ofcomfortable writing this kind of script any more. However I couldn’t get comfortable writing this kind of script any more.

So I choose to change the script into lishu which is smoother and apparently easier for me to write. So I chose to change the script into lishu which is smoother and apparently easier for me to write.

You were using the past tense in your previous sentences. It's best to apply parallelism and use the same tense here, too.

So I choose to change the script into lishu which is smoother and apparently easier for me to write. So I chose to change the script to lishu which is smoother and apparently easier for me to write.

Habit formationIt takes time and active effort. to form good habits. It takes time and active effort to form good habits.

Sounds more natural

Persistency is also one of the most crucial factors of habit formation. Persistency is also one of the most crucial factors of habit formation.

'Persistence' sounds better than 'persistency' but you do you.

Persistencye is also one of the most crucial factors of habit formation.in forming habits. Persistence is also one of the most crucial factors in forming habits.

Just do it and, stick to it and practice. Just do it, stick to it and practice.