Oct. 20, 2023
A description of the picture "Beard"
The picture(https://imgur.com/a/hdtPZiI) is called “Beard”. Everything begins with a woman entering the shop and leaving her baby alone. Not the best idea if you ask me. A pedestrian enters the next frame: he is an old man with a beard similar to Lenin’s one, hat and glasses. The man gets interested with the kid in the left alone pushchair, so he bends towards. Really, I can’t think why he would do this with the strange child, but the kid doesn’t like his privacy interfered, so he grabs the man’s beard, and he wouldn’t let it go. The man finally detaches him, but the kid has torn off his beard.
The last frame shows us the smiling kid with the torn off beard in his grasp and the shocked mother who has just left the store. I think the man got what he deserved because people shouldn’t do whatever they want with strange children. And, of course, mothers shouldn’t leave their children alone.
Really, I can’t think why he would do this with thea stranger's child, but the kid doesn’t like the intrusion on his privacy interfered, so he grabs the man’s beard, and he wouldn’t let it go.
We don't interfere with privacy, we intrude on privacy.
Oct. 22, 2023
Thank you for the correction.
Oct. 22, 2023
You're welcome :)
A description of the picture "Beard"
The picture(https://imgur.com/a/hdtPZiI) is called “Beard”.
Everything begins withIn the first frame, a woman enterings the shop and leavinges her baby alone outside.
The original is grammatically correct; I tried to make it more natural.
Not the best idea if you ask me.
A pedestrian enters the next frame: he is an old man with a beard similar to Lenin’s one,. He is wearing a hat and glasses.
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Really, I can’t think why he would do this with thea strange child, but the kid doesn’t likappreciate this privacy interferedinvasion of privacy, so he grabs the man’s beard, and he wouldn’won't let it go.
The man finally dgetachess the kid off him, but the kid has torn off his beard.
The last frame shows us the smiling kid with the torn off beard in his graspfist and the shocked mother who has just left the store.
I think the man got what he deserved because people shouldn’t do whatever they want with strangers' children.
And, of course, mothers shouldn’t leave their children alone.
Oct. 22, 2023
Thank you for the correction.
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Everything begins with a woman entering the shop and leaving her baby alone.
The original is grammatically correct; I tried to make it more natural. |
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A description of the picture "Beard" This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The picture(https://imgur.com/a/hdtPZiI) is called “Beard”. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not the best idea if you ask me. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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A pedestrian enters the next frame: he is an old man with a beard similar to Lenin’s one, hat and glasses. A pedestrian enters the next frame: he is an old man with a beard similar to Lenin’s |
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The man gets interested with the kid in the left alone pushchair, so he bends towards. The man |
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Really, I can’t think why he would do this with the strange child, but the kid doesn’t like his privacy interfered, so he grabs the man’s beard, and he wouldn’t let it go. Really, I can’t think why he would do this with Really, I can’t think why he would do this with We don't interfere with privacy, we intrude on privacy. |
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The man finally detaches him, but the kid has torn off his beard. The man finally |
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The last frame shows us the smiling kid with the torn off beard in his grasp and the shocked mother who has just left the store. The last frame shows us the smiling kid with the torn off beard in his |
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I think the man got what he deserved because people shouldn’t do whatever they want with strange children. I think the man got what he deserved because people shouldn’t do whatever they want with strangers' children. |
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And, of course, mothers shouldn’t leave their children alone. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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