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A debate

Yesterday my friend and I had a debate about how to avoid conflicts between two different cultures. His opinion was to separate these two countries and stop every communication. His opinion sounds ridiculously to me, I refuted immediately with the concept of Global village. We human now is living in a community with a shared future for mankind, it's impossible to separate communication. For me, on the opposite, i think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts. In the end, my friend was convinced by my words.

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Yesterday my friend and I had a debate about how to avoid conflicts between two different cultures.

His opinion was to separate these two countries and stop every communication between them.

His opinion sounds ridiculously to me, I refuted immediately with the concept of a Global vVillage.

We human now isare living in a community with a shared future for mankind, it's impossible to separatehave no communication.

For me, on the oppositeOn the contrary, iI think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.

In the end, my friend was convinced by my words.

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yuan10960

Oct. 17, 2023

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thank you for the help😇

A debate

Yesterday my friend and I had a debate about how to avoid conflicts between two different cultures.

His opinion was to separate these two countries and stop every communication.

His opinion soundsed ridiculously to me, I refuted immediately with the concept of G"global village" concept.

We humans now is livinge in a community with a shared future for mankind, and it's impossible to separatecut off communication.

For me, on the oppositeOn the contrary, iI think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.

In the end, my friend was convinced by my words.

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Nice work, I agree that communication is key!

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yuan10960

Oct. 11, 2023

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Thank you for the help😄

Yesterday my friend and I had a debate about how to avoid conflicts between two different cultures.

His opinion was to separate these twodifferent countries and stop everyall communication.

Or "His opinion was to cease all interactions between different countries." Also, opinion or "solution" is ok.

His opinion soundsed ridiculously to me, and I refuted it immediately with the concept of a Global vVillage.

We humans now is living in ae in a global community with a shared future for mankind, so it's impossible to separate ourselves from communication.

For me, on theI think the exact opposite, i. I think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.

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yuan10960

Oct. 10, 2023

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thanks for the help😁

A debate


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Yesterday my friend and I had a debate about how to avoid conflicts between two different cultures.


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Yesterday my friend and I had a debate about how to avoid conflicts between two different cultures.

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His opinion was to separate these two countries and stop every communication.


His opinion was to separate these twodifferent countries and stop everyall communication.

Or "His opinion was to cease all interactions between different countries." Also, opinion or "solution" is ok.

His opinion was to separate these two countries and stop every communication.

His opinion was to separate these two countries and stop every communication between them.

His opinion sounds ridiculously to me, I refuted immediately with the concept of Global village.


His opinion soundsed ridiculously to me, and I refuted it immediately with the concept of a Global vVillage.

His opinion soundsed ridiculously to me, I refuted immediately with the concept of G"global village" concept.

His opinion sounds ridiculously to me, I refuted immediately with the concept of a Global vVillage.

We human now is living in a community with a shared future for mankind, it's impossible to separate communication.


We humans now is living in ae in a global community with a shared future for mankind, so it's impossible to separate ourselves from communication.

We humans now is livinge in a community with a shared future for mankind, and it's impossible to separatecut off communication.

We human now isare living in a community with a shared future for mankind, it's impossible to separatehave no communication.

For me, on the opposite, i think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.


For me, on theI think the exact opposite, i. I think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.

For me, on the oppositeOn the contrary, iI think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.

For me, on the oppositeOn the contrary, iI think communication is the only way to avoid conflicts.

In the end, my friend was convinced by my words.


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