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satota

Dec. 26, 2022

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"A death in Tokyo"

I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there. It seems that the book has recently come into the world.

When I first saw the English title, I thought it was too vague and obscure since the original title is "麒麟の翼"(Kylin's wing).

Anyway, now I'm enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word. I can't stop reading!

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"A dDeath in Tokyo"

I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago whilen I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.

It seems that the book hwas recently come into the worlpublished.

When I first saw the English title, I thought it was too vague and obscure since the original title is "麒麟の翼"(Kylin's wing).

Anyway, now I'mI've been enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word.

I can't stop reading!

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satota

March 30, 2024

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thank you.

"_A dDeath in Tokyo"_

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles. I realize we can't underline in LangCorrect but I wanted to make sure that you knew that we underline or italicize titles of books.

I bought an e-book titled "_A dDeath in Tokyo"_ on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.

It seemappears that the book hwas recently come into the worlpublished.

"A book was recently published" is more the kind of phrasing we use in the US.

When I first saw the English title, I thought it was too vague and obscure since the original title is "麒麟の翼" (Kylin's wWing)".

Anyway, now I'm enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word.

I can't stop reading!

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面白そうです。教えてくれてありがとうございました。よく出来ました。

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satota

Dec. 29, 2022

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ありがとう。同じ著者の"A midsummer's equation"(「真夏の方程式」)もオススメです。最近添削できていなくて、ごめんなさい。

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mari

Dec. 29, 2022

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ありがとう。同じ著者の"A midsummer's equation"(「真夏の方程式」)もオススメです。最近添削できていなくて、ごめんなさい。

気にしないで。「真夏の方程式」というおすすめって、また教えてくれてありがとうございました!

"A death in Tokyo"

I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.

It seems that the book has recently come into the world.

What you wrote is correct, but it sounds a little literary and dramatic. It might be most natural to say
"It seems the book was recently published".

When I first saw the English title, I thought it was too vague and obscure since the original title is "麒麟の翼"(Kylin's wing).

Anyway, now I'm enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word.

You can also say "Anyway, I've been enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word."

I can't stop reading!

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Nice writing! Your grammar is very good so I tried to be a bit more picky with the corrections :)

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satota

Dec. 27, 2022

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Thank you!

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satota

March 30, 2024

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Thank you for your correction.

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I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, who is my favorite author there.

Adding linking words so sentence flows better

It seems that the book has recently come into the worlbeen published.

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The book sounds interesting :)

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satota

Dec. 27, 2022

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Thanks. I really appreciate it.

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satota

March 30, 2024

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Thank you!

"A death in Tokyo"


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"_A dDeath in Tokyo"_

We capitalize the first letter of important words in titles. I realize we can't underline in LangCorrect but I wanted to make sure that you knew that we underline or italicize titles of books.

"A dDeath in Tokyo"

I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.


I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, who is my favorite author there.

Adding linking words so sentence flows better

I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.

I bought an e-book titled "_A dDeath in Tokyo"_ on Amazon two weeks ago when I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.

I bought an e-book titled "A death in Tokyo" on Amazon two weeks ago whilen I was browsing the books by Keigo Higashino, my favorite author there.

It seems that the book has recently come into the world.


It seems that the book has recently come into the worlbeen published.

It seems that the book has recently come into the world.

What you wrote is correct, but it sounds a little literary and dramatic. It might be most natural to say "It seems the book was recently published".

It seemappears that the book hwas recently come into the worlpublished.

"A book was recently published" is more the kind of phrasing we use in the US.

It seems that the book hwas recently come into the worlpublished.

When I first saw the English title, I thought it was too vague and obscure since the original title is "麒麟の翼"(Kylin's wing).


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When I first saw the English title, I thought it was too vague and obscure since the original title is "麒麟の翼" (Kylin's wWing)".

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyway, now I'm enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word.


Anyway, now I'm enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word.

You can also say "Anyway, I've been enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word."

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Anyway, now I'mI've been enjoying reading it on the Kindle app on Android with the help of Wise Word.

I can't stop reading!


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