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A Day with Sofía

Sofía wakes up early, not because she's in a hurry, but because she likes to take advantage of the day with calmly. While she makes coffee, listens to soft music, and looks through the window at how the sun starts to shine on the trees. She loves this moment when everything stays in calm. Later she goes out to walk in the park, always with a notebook in her hand to write ideas or draw things that inspire her. Sofía is a curious person; she likes to talk with strangers, and discover new stories. Sometimes she looks distracted, but in reality she's noticing everything, saving little details that she later turns into thoughts or drawings.


Un día con Sofía

Sofía se despierta temprano, no porque tenga prisa, sino porque le gusta aprovechar la calma de la mañana. Mientras prepara café, escucha música suave y observa por la ventana cómo el sol empieza a iluminar los árboles. Le encanta ese momento en el que todo parece tranquilo. Después sale a caminar por el parque, siempre con una libreta en la mano para escribir ideas o dibujar cosas que le inspiran. Sofía es una persona curiosa, le gusta hablar con desconocidos y descubrir historias nuevas. A veces parece distraída, pero en realidad está observando todo, guardando pequeños detalles que luego convierte en pensamientos o dibujos.

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A Day with Sofía

Sofía wakes up early, not because she's in a hurry, but because she likes to take advantage of the day with calmly.

While she makes coffee, she listens to soft music, and looks through the window at how the sun starts to shine onthrough the trees.

She loves this moment when everything istays in calm.

Later she goes out to walk in the park, always with a notebook in her hand to write ideas or draw things that inspire her.

Sofía is a curious person; she likes to talk with strangers, and to discover new stories.

Sometimes she looks distracted, but in reality she's noticing everything, saving little details that she later turns into thoughts or drawings.

Both correct but this is better

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Sofía wakes up early, not because she's in a hurry, but because she likes to take advantage of the day with calmly.

While she makes coffee, listens to soft music, and looks through the window at how the sun starts to shine on the trees.

She loves this moment when everything stays in calm.

Later she goes out to walk in the park, always with a notebook in her hand to write ideas or draw things that inspired her.

Sofíia is a curious person; she likes to talk with strangers, and discover new stories.

Sometimes she looks distracted, but in reality she's noticinge everything, saving little details that she later turns into thoughts or drawings. later

A Day with Sofía


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Sofía wakes up early, not because she's in a hurry, but because she likes to take advantage of the day with calmly.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sofía wakes up early, not because she's in a hurry, but because she likes to take advantage of the day with calmly.

While she makes coffee, listens to soft music, and looks through the window at how the sun starts to shine on the trees.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

While she makes coffee, she listens to soft music, and looks through the window at how the sun starts to shine onthrough the trees.

She loves this moment when everything stays in calm.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

She loves this moment when everything istays in calm.

Later she goes out to walk in the park, always with a notebook in her hand to write ideas or draw things that inspire her.


Later she goes out to walk in the park, always with a notebook in her hand to write ideas or draw things that inspired her.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Sofía is a curious person; she likes to talk with strangers, and discover new stories.


Sofíia is a curious person; she likes to talk with strangers, and discover new stories.

Sofía is a curious person; she likes to talk with strangers, and to discover new stories.

Sometimes she looks distracted, but in reality she's noticing everything, saving little details that she later turns into thoughts or drawings.


Sometimes she looks distracted, but in reality she's noticinge everything, saving little details that she later turns into thoughts or drawings. later

Sometimes she looks distracted, but in reality she's noticing everything, saving little details that she later turns into thoughts or drawings.

Both correct but this is better

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