Jan. 4, 2025
A day with difficulty in pronunciation
My body had new problem,it was beginning cough yesterday night,and I felt a sore throat today. It should be that it has started to get inflamed again.
It's too difficulty to me in pronouncing words, and speaking became a challenge that was hard to achieve. I started to try to be a mute. I found it was not bad to be a mute. I didn't have to talk every day and don't tired.
I feel bad when writing here. My grammar is poor. There are many mistakes every time I write. So I don't feel good and I'm a little worried. Maybe it's because I'm ill. I hope to be happy tomorrow.
今天身体又出现新的问题，昨天开始咳嗽，今天就感觉到喉咙很疼，应该是又开始发炎了。我开始发音困难，讲话变成了了很难完成的挑战。我开始尝试当个哑巴，我发现当哑巴也不错，不用天天说话，不会那么累。
我之前好像也有过不能说话的问题，但是后面就很快恢复了，我相信现在也在慢慢变好。虽然我的头很疼，我的眼睛也很疼，但是我还是充满希望！
我现在已经感觉在这里写作文会感觉很痛苦，因为我的语法太差了，我每次写作都有很多问题，这让我没有成就感，也有点焦虑。可能是因为我生病了，所以我会比较悲观，希望明天能快乐！
My body hads a new problem,it. I was beginning to cough yesterdaylast night, and I felttoday I had a sore throat today.
"yesterday night" isn't really said, usually it's last night.
It's unusual in English to refer to your body separately to yourself, so I changed "it" to "I"
It shcould be that it has started to get inflamed again.
Should implies that something is the correct way to be. You probably want "could" here, which is about possibility.
It's too difficulty to for me into pronouncinge words, and speaking has becaome a challenge that wais hard to achievovercome.
Difficulty is for talking about quantity as a concept, when talking comparatively you should use difficult.
Another alternative is "It's causing difficulty for me when pronouncing words".
The changes to the second part of the sentence are to match tense with the first part.
I started to try to be a mute.
"a mute" as a noun on its own is slightly insulting to mute people, so you should avoid using it. If you're talking about someone with medical muteness, you can say "a mute person", but if you're just talking about your temporary condition, it's better to just use the adjective form.
I found it was not bad to be a mute.
I didn't have to talk every day and doidn't get tired.
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Don't feel bad about the corrections that you get here. This is a site specifically for grammar advice, so you will get corrections on stuff that people are perfectly able to understand in every day speech. It's only by trying and making mistakes that we can get better. I'm learning Japanese here and I'm sure my Japanese has as many mistakes.
Jan. 5, 2025
Thank you,I know,I'll keep learning.
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A day with difficulty in pronunciation |
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My body had new problem,it was beginning cough yesterday night,and I felt a sore throat today. My body ha "yesterday night" isn't really said, usually it's last night. It's unusual in English to refer to your body separately to yourself, so I changed "it" to "I" |
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It should be that it has started to get inflamed again. It Should implies that something is the correct way to be. You probably want "could" here, which is about possibility. |
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It's too difficulty to me in pronouncing words, and speaking became a challenge that was hard to achieve. It's too difficult Difficulty is for talking about quantity as a concept, when talking comparatively you should use difficult. Another alternative is "It's causing difficulty for me when pronouncing words". The changes to the second part of the sentence are to match tense with the first part. |
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I started to try to be a mute. I started to try to be "a mute" as a noun on its own is slightly insulting to mute people, so you should avoid using it. If you're talking about someone with medical muteness, you can say "a mute person", but if you're just talking about your temporary condition, it's better to just use the adjective form. |
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I found it was not bad to be a mute. I found |
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I didn't have to talk every day and don't tired. I didn't have to talk every day and d |
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I feel bad when writing here. |
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My grammar is poor. |
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There are many mistakes every time I write. |
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So I don't feel good and I'm a little worried. |
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Maybe it's because I'm ill. |
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I hope to be happy tomorrow. |
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