Sept. 14, 2021
A day on my holidays
My holidays are to be better than I was. I constantly think in different and new ways of expanding my knowledge in English, for example, new vocabulary and currently my writing ability. Topic wich is questionable due to the long period I have intended to improve it but without profit.
Besides everything mention above, after studying another semester, I enjoy meeting with my friends again. They come to my house and together we watch movies and catch up. I remember the most recent meeting we were chatting about nightmares and one of them mention he had been dreaming with demons which would be chasing him, also with aliens and clowns in other situations. It was spook, the conversation was followed by the stories of my other friend and mine. We died laughing at our dreams. Eventually, it was too late and they went home. That is how I spend a day on holidays.
If you could correct my punctuation as well I'd thank you a lot.
A day on my holidays
In American English: "A day on vacation."
My holidays are to be better than I was.
The meaning is unclear here. Can you leave me a comment and I can try to help? O puedes escribirlo en español y te ayudaré a traducirlo.
I constantly think inof different and new ways of expanding my knowledge in English, for example,including developing new vocabulary and, currently, improving my writing ability.
The first part of the sentence makes it sound like you've come up with strategies. "new vocabulary" is just a noun phrase - "developing new vocabulary" is a strategy.
Topic wich is questionable due to the long period I have intended to improve it but without profit.
Not sure what this means - leave me a comment?
Besides everything mentioned above, after studying another semester, I enjoyed meeting with my friends again.
Meeting my friends = seeing my friends
Meeting with my friends = having a meeting (more official, meeting for a purpose)
They come to my house and together we watch movies and catch up.
I remember the most recent meetingtime I saw them, we were chatting about nightmares, and one of them mentioned that he had been dreaming withabout demons which would be chasing him, also withnd aliens and clowns in other situations.
"Meeting" is official - not just hanging out with friends.
soñar con --> dream about
It was spook, ty. The conversation was followed by the stories of my other friend's stories and mine.
We died laughing at our dreams.
Eventually, it was too late and they went home.
More natural: "it got late."
That is how I spend a day on holidays.
If you could correct my punctuation as well, I'd thank you a lot.
more natural: "I'd really appreciate it."
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A day on my holidays A day on In American English: "A day on vacation." |
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My holidays are to be better than I was. My holidays are to be better than I was. The meaning is unclear here. Can you leave me a comment and I can try to help? O puedes escribirlo en español y te ayudaré a traducirlo. |
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I constantly think in different and new ways of expanding my knowledge in English, for example, new vocabulary and currently my writing ability. I constantly think The first part of the sentence makes it sound like you've come up with strategies. "new vocabulary" is just a noun phrase - "developing new vocabulary" is a strategy. |
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Topic wich is questionable due to the long period I have intended to improve it but without profit. Topic wich is questionable due to the long period I have intended to improve it but without profit. Not sure what this means - leave me a comment? |
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Besides everything mention above, after studying another semester, I enjoy meeting with my friends again. Besides everything mentioned above, after studying another semester, I enjoyed meeting Meeting my friends = seeing my friends Meeting with my friends = having a meeting (more official, meeting for a purpose) |
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They come to my house and together we watch movies and catch up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I remember the most recent meeting we were chatting about nightmares and one of them mention he had been dreaming with demons which would be chasing him, also with aliens and clowns in other situations. I remember the most recent "Meeting" is official - not just hanging out with friends. soñar con --> dream about |
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It was spook, the conversation was followed by the stories of my other friend and mine. It was spook |
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We died laughing at our dreams. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Eventually, it was too late and they went home. Eventually, it was too late and they went home. More natural: "it got late." |
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That is how I spend a day on holidays. That is how I spend a day on holiday |
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If you could correct my punctuation as well I'd thank you a lot. If you could correct my punctuation as well, I'd thank you a lot. more natural: "I'd really appreciate it." |
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