Aug. 13, 2023
A day of my diary
I go to Bergamo to visit my friend Leo. He's been my friend for a half year. He's Russian and went to Italy because in Russia is very bad political situation. In the morning I and Gianni go to eat outside. Well he do it every mornig but I no, I need to eat more in the mornings no only a capucino and cruasant. Usualy I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk and fried eggs.
A day ofin my diary
I gowent to Bergamo to visit my friend Leo.
This is a diary entry so it must be past tense.
He's been my friend for a half a year.
He's Russian and went to Italy because the political situation in Russia is very bad political situation.
In the morning I and Gianni go to eand I ate outside.
Your name is always placed after the name of the other person. Past tense is also used here.
Well he do itHe does this every morning but I no,t me. I need to eat more in the mornings, not only a capupuccino and cruaoissant.
Usually I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk, and fried eggs.
The plural form of fruit is fruit :) The comma is added after milk so that it does not sound like the fried eggs are in the porridge.
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Good work. I see many of these mistakes with native English speakers.
He's been my friend for a half yearsix months.
What you wrote wasn't technically incorrect, but this sounds much more natural.
He's Russian and went to Italy because in Russia isthere is a very bad political situation.
In the morning, I and Gianni go to eat outside.
Well, he does it every morning but I no,don't. I need to eat more in the mornings, not only a cappuccino and cruaoissant.
Usualyly, I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk, and fried eggs.
Adding the second comma makes it clear that you are not putting eggs in your porridge.
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Good work!
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I go to Bergamo to visit my friend Leo. I This is a diary entry so it must be past tense. |
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He's been my friend for a half year. He's been my friend for What you wrote wasn't technically incorrect, but this sounds much more natural. He's been my friend for |
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He's Russian and went to Italy because in Russia is very bad political situation. He's Russian and went to Italy because in Russia He's Russian and went to Italy because the political situation in Russia is very bad |
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In the morning I and Gianni go to eat outside. In the morning, I and Gianni go to eat outside. In the morning Your name is always placed after the name of the other person. Past tense is also used here. |
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Well he do it every mornig but I no, I need to eat more in the mornings no only a capucino and cruasant. Well, he does it every morning but I
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Usualy I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk and fried eggs. Usual Adding the second comma makes it clear that you are not putting eggs in your porridge. Usually I eat porridge with fruit The plural form of fruit is fruit :) The comma is added after milk so that it does not sound like the fried eggs are in the porridge. |
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