A day ofin my diary A day in my diary

I gowent to Bergamo to visit my friend Leo. I went to Bergamo to visit my friend Leo.

This is a diary entry so it must be past tense.

He's been my friend for a half yearsix months. He's been my friend for six months.

What you wrote wasn't technically incorrect, but this sounds much more natural.

He's been my friend for a half a year. He's been my friend for half a year.

He's Russian and went to Italy because in Russia isthere is a very bad political situation. He's Russian and went to Italy because in Russia there is a very bad political situation.

He's Russian and went to Italy because the political situation in Russia is very bad political situation. He's Russian and went to Italy because the political situation in Russia is very bad.

In the morning, I and Gianni go to eat outside. In the morning, I and Gianni go to eat outside.

In the morning I and Gianni go to eand I ate outside. In the morning Gianni and I ate outside.

Your name is always placed after the name of the other person. Past tense is also used here.

Well, he does it every morning but I no,don't. I need to eat more in the mornings, not only a cappuccino and cruaoissant. Well, he does it every morning but I don't. I need to eat more in the mornings, not only a cappuccino and croissant.

Well he do itHe does this every morning but I no,t me. I need to eat more in the mornings, not only a capupuccino and cruaoissant. He does this every morning but not me. I need to eat more in the mornings, not only a cappuccino and croissant.

Usualyly, I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk, and fried eggs. Usually, I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk, and fried eggs.

Adding the second comma makes it clear that you are not putting eggs in your porridge.

Usually I eat porridge with fruits and soy milk, and fried eggs. Usually I eat porridge with fruit and soy milk, and fried eggs.

The plural form of fruit is fruit :) The comma is added after milk so that it does not sound like the fried eggs are in the porridge.