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Tammy

May 16, 2025

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A Day of a Rose

A lovely rose is blooming in my windowsill garden. I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I left a camera to capture its blossom this morning. Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4

I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物 since childhood. It means to acquire knowledge by examining the essence of things.

The video shows that the rose doesn't bloom all at once. When the sun comes out, it blooms a little. When the sun is hidden, the rose stops blooming and even goes back a little.

Life is full of ups and downs, and I just need to face them calmly.

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A Day of a Rose

A day in the Life of a Rose.

I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4 I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物 since childhood.

It means to acquire knowledge by examining the essence of things.

The video shows that the rose doesn't bloom all at once.

When the sun comes out, it blooms a little.

Life is full of ups and downs, and I just need to face them calmly.

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This is lovely.

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Tammy

May 17, 2025

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Thank you very much!

Have a nice weekend!

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A Day of a Rose

A lovely rose is blooming ion my windowsill garden.

I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4 I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物 since childhood.

It means to acquire knowledge by examining the essence of things.

The video shows that the rose doesn't bloom all at once.

When the sun comes out, it blooms a little.

When the sun is hidden, the rose stops blooming and even goes back a little.

Life is full of ups and downs, and I just need to face them calmly.

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Beautiful :)

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Tammy

May 17, 2025

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Thank you very much!

Have a nice weekend!

A lovely rose is blooming in my windowsill garden.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4 I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物 since childhood.

It means to acquire knowledge by examining the essence of things.

When the sun comes out, it blooms a little.

When the sun is hidden behind the clouds, the rose stops blooming and even goes back a little.

Life is full of ups and downs, and I just need to face them calmly.

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🌹

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Tammy

May 17, 2025

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Thank you very much!

Have a nice weekend!

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Toluwani

May 18, 2025

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You are welcome :)

You too :))

A Day in the Life of a Rose

A lovely rose is blooming ion my windowsill garden.

I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4


I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物
since/ during my childhood.

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Great work! I loved your analogy and think its beautiful.

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Tammy

May 17, 2025

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Thank you very much!

Have a nice weekend!

A Day of a Rose


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A Day of a Rose

A day in the Life of a Rose.

A lovely rose is blooming in my windowsill garden.


A lovely rose is blooming ion my windowsill garden.

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A lovely rose is blooming ion my windowsill garden.

I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.


I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I wanted to watch it blooming, but I had to go out to work.

I left a camera to capture its blossom this morning.


I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

I left a camera to capture its blossoming this morning.

Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4 I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物 since childhood.


Here is the recap of its day: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/LbiwNDvb_a4


I love planting flowers because I've learned a philosophy called 格物
since/ during my childhood.

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It means to acquire knowledge by examining the essence of things.


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The video shows that the rose doesn't bloom all at once.


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When the sun comes out, it blooms a little.


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When the sun is hidden, the rose stops blooming and even goes back a little.


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Life is full of ups and downs, and I just need to face them calmly.


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