Aug. 2, 2025
A Day in the Life of My Dog
My dog is name Rocky. He is a golden retriever and he have four years old. Every morning, he wake up very early and jump on my bed to wake me up too. Sometimes I am still tired, but Rocky is always full of energy.
We go for a walk in the park, where he runs and play with other dogs. He loves to chase birds but never catch one. When we come back home, he drinks lot of water and sleep for a while.
In the afternoon, Rocky likes sit near the window and look outside. He barks when someone pass in front of our house, especially if is a cat. My mom say Rocky is like a security guard!
At night, we watch TV together. Rocky's favorite show is one with animals. He watch very atentively. Then we go sleep. I love my dog very much, he is my best friend.
Mi perro se llama Rocky. Es un golden retriever y tiene cuatro años. Cada mañana se despierta muy temprano y salta sobre mi cama para despertarme también. A veces todavía estoy cansado, pero Rocky siempre está lleno de energía.
Vamos a pasear al parque, donde corre y juega con otros perros. Le encanta perseguir pájaros, pero nunca atrapa ninguno. Cuando volvemos a casa, bebe mucha agua y duerme un rato.
Por la tarde, a Rocky le gusta sentarse cerca de la ventana y mirar hacia afuera. Ladra cuando alguien pasa por delante de nuestra casa, especialmente si es un gato. Mi mamá dice que Rocky es como un guardia de seguridad.
Por la noche, vemos la televisión juntos. El programa favorito de Rocky es uno con animales. Lo mira muy atentamente. Luego nos vamos a dormir. Quiero mucho a mi perro, es mi mejor amigo.
My dog is named Rocky. (or -- My dog's name is Rocky.)
is + named = passive. Passive tense = to be + past particple (usually an -ed ending)
He is a golden retriever and he haveis four years old.
In English, we "are" x years old. (In Spanish, we "have" an age, ie, tengo 62 años)
Every morning, he wakes up very early and jumps on my bed to wake me up too.
English present tense
I wake up
you wake up
he/she/it wakes up
they wake up
we wake up
remember the 3rd person "s"
We go for a walk in the park, where he runs and plays with other dogs.
consistent with runs ;-)
He loves to chase birds but never catches one.
3rd-person singular "S" (here an -es)
When we come back home, he drinks lot of water and sleeps for a while.
In the afternoon, Rocky likes sitting near the window and look outside. (or likes to sit)
He barks when someone passes in front of our house, especially if it is a cat.
don't forget the subject pronoun "it" before a "to be"
My mom says Rocky is like a security guard!
He watches very atentively.
Then we go to sleep.
Feedback
Really clear. There are some basic grammar issues (especially with 3rd-person singular "S", but these little errors in no way get in the way of meaning. Rocky sounds great, and I am happy to get to know him,
A Day in the Life of My Dog
My dog i's name Rocky.
He is a four year old golden retriever and he have four years old.
Rocky is a golden retriever and he is four years old.
Every morning, heRocky wakes up very early and jumps on my bed to wake me up too.
Every morning, he wakes up early and jumps on my bed to wake me up.
Sometimes I am still tired, but Rockyhe is always full of energy.
Sometimes I am tired, but Rocky is always full of energy.
We go for a walk in the park, where heRocky runs and plays with other dogs.
He loves to chase birds, but never catches one.
Rocky loves to chase birds, but never catches one.
When we come back home, he drinks a lot of water and sleep for a whiletakes a nap.
When we come back home, Rocky drinks a lot of water and takes a nap.
In the afternoon, Rocky likes to sit near the window and look outside.
In the afternoon, Rocky likes to sit near the window and look outside.
He barks when someone pass in front ofes by our house, especially if its a cat.
He barks when someone passes by our house, especially if its a cat.
My mom says Rocky is like a security guard!
My mom says Rocky is like a security guard!
He watches very attentively.
He watches intently.
Then we go to sleep.
Then we go to sleep.
I love my dog very much, he is my best friend.
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My dog is name Rocky. My dog My dog is named Rocky. (or -- My dog's name is Rocky.) is + named = passive. Passive tense = to be + past particple (usually an -ed ending) |
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He is a golden retriever and he have four years old. He is a four year old golden retriever Rocky is a golden retriever and he is four years old. He is a golden retriever and he In English, we "are" x years old. (In Spanish, we "have" an age, ie, tengo 62 años) |
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He loves to chase birds but never catch one. He loves to chase birds, but never catches one. Rocky loves to chase birds, but never catches one. He loves to chase birds but never catches one. 3rd-person singular "S" (here an -es) |
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Every morning, he wake up very early and jump on my bed to wake me up too. Every morning, Every morning, he wakes up early and jumps on my bed to wake me up. Every morning, he wakes up very early and jumps on my bed to wake me up too. English present tense I wake up you wake up he/she/it wakes up they wake up we wake up remember the 3rd person "s" |
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Sometimes I am still tired, but Rocky is always full of energy. Sometimes I am Sometimes I am tired, but Rocky is always full of energy. |
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We go for a walk in the park, where he runs and play with other dogs. We go for a walk in the park, where We go for a walk in the park, where he runs and plays with other dogs. consistent with runs ;-) |
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When we come back home, he drinks lot of water and sleep for a while. When we come back home, he drinks a lot of water and When we come back home, Rocky drinks a lot of water and takes a nap. When we come back home, he drinks lot of water and sleeps for a while. |
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In the afternoon, Rocky likes sit near the window and look outside. In the afternoon, Rocky likes to sit near the window and look outside. In the afternoon, Rocky likes to sit near the window and look outside. In the afternoon, Rocky likes sitting near the window and look outside. (or likes to sit) |
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He barks when someone pass in front of our house, especially if is a cat. He barks when someone pass He barks when someone passes by our house, especially if its a cat. He barks when someone passes in front of our house, especially if it is a cat. don't forget the subject pronoun "it" before a "to be" |
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My mom say Rocky is like a security guard! My mom says Rocky is like a security guard! My mom says Rocky is like a security guard! My mom says Rocky is like a security guard! |
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At night, we watch TV together. |
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Rocky's favorite show is one with animals. |
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He watch very atentively. He watches very attentively. He watches intently. He watches very atentively. |
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Then we go sleep. Then we go to sleep. Then we go to sleep. Then we go to sleep. |
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I love my dog very much, he is my best friend. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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