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A Day at My Parents Farm
We traveled yesterday to my parents Farm. I travelled only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here.
We went early at the village here, we enjoy a delicious traditional soup as a breakfast. It has corn and cow's stomach, it's so delicious.
Also we're enjoying of the hot weather right now.
Un día en la granja de mis padres
Viajamos ayer a la granja de mis padres. Solo viajé con mi madre y mi tía, porque mi padre nos estaba esperando aquí.
Fuimos temprano al pueblo aquí, disfrutamos de una deliciosa sopa tradicional como desayuno. Tiene maíz y estómago de vaca, es tan delicioso.
También estamos disfrutando del clima cálido en este momento.
We travelled yesterday to my parents F’ farm.
Common nouns do not start with capital letters unless at the start of a sentence.
I travelled with only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us there.
We wentarrived early at the village here,and we enjoyed a delicious traditional soup as afor breakfast.
It is unclear what the first part means. I have interpreted it as the farm being part of the village, and that you arrived there early in the morning.
Try to keep the tense consistent.
It hasd corn and cow's’ stomach, it' was so delicious.
AlsoRight now, we're enjoying of the hot weather right now.
I moved ‘right now’ to the start as a stylistic choice to fit the change in tense, as well as the change in topic.
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Use only British English or American English.
‘Travelled’ = British English
‘Traveled’ = American English.
Additionally, you switched tenses. I have edited it to stay consistent with the past tense.
A Day at My Parents' Farm
We traveled yesterday to my parents F' farm.
I travelled with only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us there.
We went early atfrom the village here, w. We enjoy aed delicious, traditional soup as afor breakfast.
It has corn and cow's stomach, it's so delicious.
Also we're enjoying of the hot weather right now.
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A Day at My Parents Farm A Day at My Parents' Farm |
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We traveled yesterday to my parents Farm. We traveled yesterday to my parents We travelled yesterday to my parents Common nouns do not start with capital letters unless at the start of a sentence. |
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I travelled only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here. I travelled with only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us there. I travelled with only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us there. |
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We went early at the village here, we enjoy a delicious traditional soup as a breakfast. We went early We It is unclear what the first part means. I have interpreted it as the farm being part of the village, and that you arrived there early in the morning. Try to keep the tense consistent. |
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It has corn and cow's stomach, it's so delicious. This sentence has been marked as perfect! It ha |
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Also we're enjoying of the hot weather right now. Also we're enjoying
I moved ‘right now’ to the start as a stylistic choice to fit the change in tense, as well as the change in topic. |
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