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A Day at My Parents Farm
We traveled yesterday to my parents Farm. I travelled only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here.
We went early at the village here, we enjoy a delicious traditional soup as a breakfast. It has corn and cow's stomach, it's so delicious.
Also we're enjoying of the hot weather right now.
Un día en la granja de mis padres
Viajamos ayer a la granja de mis padres. Solo viajé con mi madre y mi tía, porque mi padre nos estaba esperando aquí.
Fuimos temprano al pueblo aquí, disfrutamos de una deliciosa sopa tradicional como desayuno. Tiene maíz y estómago de vaca, es tan delicioso.
También estamos disfrutando del clima cálido en este momento.
A Day at My Parents Farm
We traveled yesterday to my parents' Farm yesterday.
I travelled with only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us there.
We went early ato the village here, where we enjoyed a delicious traditional soup as afor breakfast.
It hasd corn and cow's stomach, it'and it was so delicious.
Also, we're enjoying of the hot weather right now.
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Good job! I got the idea of what you were saying. The only recommendation I have is making sure you are staying in the correct tense (maintain the past tense throughout).
A Day at My Parents' Farm
We traveled yYesterday we ___ to my parents F' farm.
You need the apostrophe again (parents') and "farm" does not have a capital letter.
"Traveled" sounds too formal. A native speaker of English would probably say "we drove to..." or "we took the bus/train to..." or "we visited..."
I travelled onlywent with my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here_____.
A simple sentence with fewer words makes your meaning clear.
The reader doesn't know where "here." is. If you mean he was already at the farm and he was waiting for you there, then the right word is "there." (In the story, you are not at the farm yet because you are traveling.)
We went early at---- the village here, and we enjoyed a delicious traditional soup as afor breakfast.
"farm" and "village" are different. The reader is confused. Did you go to two different places?
We eat foods for breakfast, for lunch, for dinner.
It has corn and cow's stomach,'s made with corn and tripe; it's so delicious.
The specific word for the part of the cow's stomach that we eat is called "tripe." It is better to use this word because people who have never eaten tripe and read "cow's stomach" may think it is strange to eat. They may also think it will taste bad because no one they know eats it.
Also we'reWe're also enjoying of the hot weather right now.
You could connect this last sentence to the story by adding "in the village" or "at the farm."
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it was fun for me to read and understand your story in Spanish. The first person to correct your writing made good corrections. I wanted to add a few ideas or options. You are doing well!
A Day at My Parents' Farm
The apostrophe shows that it belongs to both parents. If you wrote "a day at my parent's farm", it would show that it belonged to only one of your parents.
WYesterday, we traveled yesterday to my parents F' farm.
This order sounds much more natural.
I travelled only with my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here.
Both "traveled" and "travelled" are acceptable spellings, but you should stick to one when writing.
We went early ato the village here, early, and we enjoyed a delicious traditional soup as a breakfast.
It has corn and cow's stomach, i. It's so delicious.
Also, we're enjoying of the hot weather right now.
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A Day at My Parents Farm A Day at My Parents' Farm The apostrophe shows that it belongs to both parents. If you wrote "a day at my parent's farm", it would show that it belonged to only one of your parents. A Day at My Parents' Farm This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We traveled yesterday to my parents Farm.
This order sounds much more natural.
You need the apostrophe again (parents') and "farm" does not have a capital letter. "Traveled" sounds too formal. A native speaker of English would probably say "we drove to..." or "we took the bus/train to..." or "we visited..." We traveled |
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I travelled only my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here. I travelled only with my mother and my aunt, because my father was waiting for us here. Both "traveled" and "travelled" are acceptable spellings, but you should stick to one when writing. I A simple sentence with fewer words makes your meaning clear. The reader doesn't know where "here." is. If you mean he was already at the farm and he was waiting for you there, then the right word is "there." (In the story, you are not at the farm yet because you are traveling.) I travelled with only my mother and |
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We went early at the village here, we enjoy a delicious traditional soup as a breakfast. We went We "farm" and "village" are different. The reader is confused. Did you go to two different places? We eat foods for breakfast, for lunch, for dinner. We went early |
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It has corn and cow's stomach, it's so delicious. It has corn and cow's stomach It The specific word for the part of the cow's stomach that we eat is called "tripe." It is better to use this word because people who have never eaten tripe and read "cow's stomach" may think it is strange to eat. They may also think it will taste bad because no one they know eats it. It ha |
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Also we're enjoying of the hot weather right now. Also, we're enjoying
You could connect this last sentence to the story by adding "in the village" or "at the farm." Also, we're enjoying |
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