June 27, 2025
A Dangerous Village
Hello, good evening!
During a family trip, we visited a village named Aguachica in Colombia. This village is close to Venezuela. We needed to spend a night there because we were on a long trip in our car and we needed to rest. Since the first moment, we felt bad vibes like darkness. The streets were empty and when we found a hotel, the lobby was empty too. It was the only hotel open with lights on. After a few minutes a receptionist appeared. She gave us a room and an alert too. She told us that we couldn't leave our car alone, because the village was full of criminals. So, if we wanted to go out from there the next day, we needed to pay a parking or better spend the night in another country. She explained to us that the situation there was terrible since Venezuela's problems. Then, we decided to continue driving until we found a better hotel.
A Dangerous Village
Hello, good evening!
During a family trip, we visited a village named Aguachica in Colombia.
This village is close to Venezuela.
We needed to spend a night there because we were on a long trip in our car and we needed to rest.
Since the first moment, we felt bad vibes like darkness.
The streets were empty and when we found a hotel, the lobby was empty too.
It was the only hotel open with lights on.
After a few minutes a receptionist appeared.
She gave us a room and an alert warning too.
She told us that we couldn't leave our car alone, because the village was full of criminals.
So, if we wanted to go out from there the next day, we needed to pay a parking space or better spend the night in another country.
She explained to us that the situation there was terrible since Venezuela's started having problems.
Then, we decided to continue driving until we found a better hotel.
June 27, 2025
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During a family trip, we visited a village named Aguachica in Colombia. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We needed to spend a night there because we were on a long trip in our car and we needed to rest. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Since the first moment, we felt bad vibes like darkness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The streets were empty and when we found a hotel, the lobby was empty too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It was the only hotel open with lights on. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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After a few minutes a receptionist appeared. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She gave us a room and an alert too. She gave us a room and a |
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She told us that we couldn't leave our car alone, because the village was full of criminals. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, if we wanted to go out from there the next day, we needed to pay a parking or better spend the night in another country. So, if we wanted to go out from there the next day, we needed to pay a parking space or better spend the night in another country. |
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She explained to us that the situation there was terrible since Venezuela's problems. She explained to us that the situation there was terrible since Venezuela |
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Then, we decided to continue driving until we found a better hotel. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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