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courageuse19

July 24, 2022

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A conversation

conversation between Alex and Jamila.

Alex : Hi Jmaila! What do you do?

Jamila: Hi Alex! Great,thanks. And you?

Alex: I'm fine too. Where you have been?

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in English that i will need to use them when i talk in a daily life. I cooked, i cleaned but i can't do it always because i'm still in pain. I also started to read again and i hope to not stop reading because i will start creating bad. that's all! How are you feeling today?

Alex: i'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy. I'm thankfull God always for you having in my life.

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cConversation between Alex and Jamila.

Make sure capitalize at the start of a line or sentence.

Alex : Hi Jmamila!

What doHow are you do?

Where you have you been?

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemewords in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in a daily life.

I cooked, iI cleaned but iI can't do it always because iI'm still in pain.

I also started to read again and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatding bad.

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.

I'm thankfull God always for you havbeing in my life.

A conversation between Alex and Jamila.

Alex : Hi Jmamila!

What do you do's up?

Alt: How are you? / How's it going?

Great, thanks.

Alt: I'm great / I'm doing well.

And you?

Alt: And how are you doing?

Alex: I'm fine, too.

There should be a comma here, though you may find that some people neglect adding it.

Where you have been?

Alt: What have you been up to?

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemethings in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in aabout daily life.

I cooked, i and cleaned, but iI can't do it always do it because iI'm still in pain.

I also started to read again, and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creating bad.

"Because I will start creating bad" -- I had a hard time understanding what you meant to say here. I suggest rewriting that part, but the rest is fine.

tThat's all!

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and y! You make me very happy.

I'm thankfull to God always for you having in my life.

Feedback

Great job!

A conversation between Alex and Jamila.

Alex : Hi, Jmamila!

What doHow are you do?

Jamila: Hi, Alex!

Where you have you been?

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in EnglishEnglish vocabulary that iI will need to use them when i talk in a daily lifeday to day.

I also cooked, iand cleaned, but iI can't do it always lot because iI'm still in pain.

I also started to read again, and iI hope to noI won't stop reading because it will start creating badbecome a bad habit.

tThat's all!

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.

Redundant

I'm thankfull to God for always for you having you in my life.

What do you do?

How are you doing?

Jamila: Hi Alex!

Great, thanks.

And you?

Alex: I'm fine too.

Where you have you been?

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in a daily life.

I cooked, iI cleaned, but iI can't do it always do it because iI'm still in pain.

I also started to read again, and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatingto feel bad.
(?)

tThat's all!

How are you feeling today?

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you, and you make me very happy.

I'm thankfull to God, always, for you having you in my life.

Alex : Hi Jmamila!

What do you do?

Do you mean 'How are you?'. 'What do you do?' is usually to ask people what job they do.

Jamila: Hi Alex!

Great,thanks.

And you?

Alex: I'm fine too.

Where youHow have have been?

Using 'where' in a question indicates location. Where have you been? I have been staying at my brother's house for the vacation.

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in a daily life.

You could also say 'I learned some words/expressions in English'

I cooked, iI cleaned but iI can't do it always because iI'm still in pain.

Remember I (pronoun) should always be in capital letters

I also started to read again and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatfeeling? bad.

'Creating bad' is not an expression that exists in English. Do you mean 'feeling bad'?

that's all!

How are you feeling today?

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.

I'm thankfull to God always for you having in my life.

Feedback

Great work, well done!

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courageuse19

July 24, 2022

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I also started to read again and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatfeeling? bad.

You are right! I want to say ....because I have a bad habbits.

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pinkyslippers

July 30, 2022

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Great! Habits only has one b. Great job!

A conversation


conversation between Alex and Jamila.


A conversation between Alex and Jamila.

A conversation between Alex and Jamila.

cConversation between Alex and Jamila.

Make sure capitalize at the start of a line or sentence.

Alex : Hi Jmaila!


Alex : Hi Jmamila!

Alex : Hi, Jmamila!

Alex : Hi Jmamila!

Alex : Hi Jmamila!

What do you do?


What do you do?

Do you mean 'How are you?'. 'What do you do?' is usually to ask people what job they do.

What do you do?

How are you doing?

What doHow are you do?

What do you do's up?

Alt: How are you? / How's it going?

What doHow are you do?

Jamila: Hi Alex!


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Jamila: Hi, Alex!

Great,thanks.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Great, thanks.

Great, thanks.

Alt: I'm great / I'm doing well.

And you?


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And you?

Alt: And how are you doing?

Alex: I'm fine too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Alex: I'm fine, too.

There should be a comma here, though you may find that some people neglect adding it.

Where you have been?


Where youHow have have been?

Using 'where' in a question indicates location. Where have you been? I have been staying at my brother's house for the vacation.

Where you have you been?

Where you have you been?

Where you have been?

Alt: What have you been up to?

Where you have you been?

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in English that i will need to use them when i talk in a daily life.


Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in a daily life.

You could also say 'I learned some words/expressions in English'

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in a daily life.

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemes in EnglishEnglish vocabulary that iI will need to use them when i talk in a daily lifeday to day.

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemethings in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in aabout daily life.

Jamila : Well, I learned some itemewords in English that iI will need to use them when iI talk in a daily life.

I cooked, i cleaned but i can't do it always because i'm still in pain.


I cooked, iI cleaned but iI can't do it always because iI'm still in pain.

Remember I (pronoun) should always be in capital letters

I cooked, iI cleaned, but iI can't do it always do it because iI'm still in pain.

I also cooked, iand cleaned, but iI can't do it always lot because iI'm still in pain.

I cooked, i and cleaned, but iI can't do it always do it because iI'm still in pain.

I cooked, iI cleaned but iI can't do it always because iI'm still in pain.

I also started to read again and i hope to not stop reading because i will start creating bad.


I also started to read again and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatfeeling? bad.

'Creating bad' is not an expression that exists in English. Do you mean 'feeling bad'?

I also started to read again, and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatingto feel bad.
(?)

I also started to read again, and iI hope to noI won't stop reading because it will start creating badbecome a bad habit.

I also started to read again, and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creating bad.

"Because I will start creating bad" -- I had a hard time understanding what you meant to say here. I suggest rewriting that part, but the rest is fine.

I also started to read again and iI hope to not stop reading because iI will start creatding bad.

that's all!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

tThat's all!

tThat's all!

tThat's all!

How are you feeling today?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Alex: i'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.


Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you, and you make me very happy.

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.

Redundant

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and y! You make me very happy.

Alex: iI'm feeling happy to see you and you make me very happy.

I'm thankfull God always for you having in my life.


I'm thankfull to God always for you having in my life.

I'm thankfull to God, always, for you having you in my life.

I'm thankfull to God for always for you having you in my life.

I'm thankfull to God always for you having in my life.

I'm thankfull God always for you havbeing in my life.

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