Aug. 27, 2021
A Concert
Long ago, I went to Yanni's concert.
He is well known composer of new age genre and his sons are used for background music on TV advertisements.
The concert was held in a large stadium in Seoul.
When I arrived the concert hall, there were full of people.
During the concert, all of them, including me, were blown away.
One of the favorite parts on his concert was that introducing music players.
He has his own orchestra team, and the players were also great.
I could listen to each players' fabulous performance on the part.
After finishing the concerts, I was full of happiness.
If I have another chance, I look forward to going again.
Long ago, I went to a Yanni's concert.
Yanni's concert makes it sound like the concert belongs to him which isn't really the case
He is well known composer of new age genre and his songs are used foras background music on TV advertisements.
When I arrived at the concert hall, there were fulla lot of people.
there were a lot of OR it was full of
One of themy favorite parts onf his concert was thate introducing music players.tion of the musicians
He has his own orchestra team, and the playermusicians were also great.
After finishing the concerts, I was full of happiness.
"full of happiness" isn't wrong but it doesn't sound very natural - you could say: I was full of joy OR I was very happy
Aug. 28, 2021
Thank you very much.
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A Concert |
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Long ago, I went to Yanni's concert. Long ago, I went to a Yanni Yanni's concert makes it sound like the concert belongs to him which isn't really the case |
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He is well known composer of new age genre and his sons are used for background music on TV advertisements. He is well known composer of new age genre and his songs are used |
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The concert was held in a large stadium in Seoul. |
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When I arrived the concert hall, there were full of people. When I arrived at the concert hall, there were there were a lot of OR it was full of |
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During the concert, all of them, including me, were blown away. |
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One of the favorite parts on his concert was that introducing music players. One of |
|
He has his own orchestra team, and the players were also great. He has his own orchestra team, and the |
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I could listen to each players' fabulous performance on the part. |
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After finishing the concerts, I was full of happiness. After finishing the concert "full of happiness" isn't wrong but it doesn't sound very natural - you could say: I was full of joy OR I was very happy |
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If I have another chance, I look forward to going again. |
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