March 18, 2022
A class excursion to the zoo
What about the trip?
Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia. Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I were talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
What we did?
When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map. We go over almost all the animal zones
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits... I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.
Recommendation
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys. They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.
Report B2 First Exam
You recently made a one-day excursion with your class to a local place of interest. Now the director of your college has asked you to write a report to explain what you did and say why you think the day was a success.
A class excursion to the zoo
Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagumates to a zoo in Valencia.
Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
What did we dido?
When we arrived ato the zoo, the personnelstaff gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map.
We go overvisited almost all of the animal zones.
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about everythe animals, like theirs family which they belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits...
I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework.
Recommendations
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spending more time visiting the monkeys.
They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.
Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
What did we dido?
When we arrived ato the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and rules and a map.
We gowent over almost all the animal zones
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about everyach animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits...
I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework assignment about it.
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys.
They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.
March 19, 2022
Thanks for your help bonbonmacaron
Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking withto my school friends and we were goofing around.
When we arrived to the zoo, the personnel gave us a leaflet with instructions and, rules and a map.
When you list more than two things in a sentence, you only use "and" when listing the last thing
For example: Today I have to buy bread, butter, milk and cheese from the grocery.
Behind every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family they belonging to, theirs habitat, theirs life habits...
I took several notes about different felines since I'll haved to do a homework.
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spending more time visiting the monkeys.
Feedback
Aside from the few grammar mistakes, this is pretty good👏🏾👏🏾
March 19, 2022
Thank you 😊
A class excursion to the zoo
What about the trip?
Last week I did a school trip with my class colleagues to a zoo in Valencia.
Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
What did we dido?
When we arrived ato the zoo, the personnelstaff gave us a leaflet with instructions and, rules, and a map.
The word "personnel" is more commonly used when talking about the staff internally, in an HR or finance context.
We go overwent through almost all the animal zoneszones for the varied animals.
BehindAt every cage there was a sign with information about every animal, like theirs family belonging, theirs habitat, theirs life habits...
"Behind" would make it very hard to read....
I took several notes about different felines since I'll have to do a homework assignment.
For people who want to go to the zoo, even though everybody goes directly to the big cats places, I strongly recommend to spend more time visiting the monkeys.
They don't usually hide and they're pretty much amusing 🐒.
Feedback
Nice work.
March 18, 2022
Although it was a long trip by bus, I enjoyed it because I wereas talking with my school friends and we were goofing around.
Tu versión con "with" no está mal, por cierto, sólo es menos común. Personalmente lo prefiero también, porque "to" suena muy unidireccional. ;)
Mira: https://books.google.com/ngrams/graph?content=talk_INF+with%2Ctalk_INF+to&year_start=1800&year_end=2019&corpus=29&smoothing=3
March 19, 2022
Thanks for the correction. Very interesting the google ngrams, great tool !
March 19, 2022
My pleasure, and it sure is.
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