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WordSmith2025

Jan. 26, 2025

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A chill sunday

I'm now writing this text because a i have already discovered the community. I was looking for a website to practice german until now, but i found this website and i believe the community is engaged in learn together. I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now i will write about mine.

I woke up early six ou seven in the morning, did my workout and after all get my breakfast. I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, yesterday i worked and now i'm thinking about go to the beach at the afternoon. I really want some help to improve my writing in english, i'm trying to do a little text every day, but some days i don't have nothing to right abou, my mind just stop and can't do progress. However, read and listen to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, i also work with some chinese guys and i practice more english with chinese guys than with native english speakers. At reddit people are kind rude and sarcastic, i don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if we want to improve ourselves as person.


Estou escrevendo isso agora porque acabei de descobrir a comunidade. Estava procurando um site para praticar alemão até agora, mas encontrei este e acredito que a comunidade está realmente engajada em aprender junta. Vi algumas pessoas descrevendo sua rotina matinal, então agora vou escrever sobre a minha.

Acordei cedo, por volta das seis ou sete da manhã, fiz meu treino e depois tomei o café da manhã. Comi alguns ovos com pão e café, apenas uma manhã normal. Ontem trabalhei e agora estou pensando em ir à praia à tarde. Eu realmente quero ajuda para melhorar minha escrita em inglês. Estou tentando escrever um texto curto todos os dias, mas tem dias que simplesmente não consigo pensar em nada para escrever. Minha mente simplesmente para e não consigo progredir. No entanto, ler e ouvir outras pessoas em filmes e vídeos faz parte da minha rotina. Também trabalho com alguns chineses e pratico mais inglês com eles do que com falantes nativos de inglês. No Reddit, as pessoas são meio rudes e sarcásticas, e eu não gosto desse tipo de comportamento, ainda mais se queremos nos melhorar como pessoas.

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A cChill sSunday

I'm now writing this text now because a iI have already discovered theis community.

I was looking for a website to practice gGerman until now, but iI found this website and iI believe the community is engaged (in learning together / to learn together).

I woke up early, six our seven in the morning, did my workout and after all gethat got my breakfast.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, y. Yesterday i worked and now iI'm thinking about going to the beach at the afternoon.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, iI'm trying to do a little text every day, but some days iI don't have noanything to wrighte about, my mind just stop and can't do progress.

"right" = "correct" or the direction. You want "write" here. They sound the same, but are spelled differently.

"progress" is one of those words that works as a noun or a verb.

"I don't have nothing" is a double negative. It's better to say "I don't have anything". This is one of those stereotypical things that native speakers often correct each other for getting wrong, to the point that certain dialects (e.g. AAVE) consider it normal, but for most dialects it's considered a mistake.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, i. I also work with some cChinese guys and i practice more eEnglish with cChinese guys than with native eEnglish speakers.

At reddit people are kind of rude and sarcastic, i. I don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if we wantso when we're trying to improve ourselves as personople.

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Good luck, hope you find what you're looking for here.

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WordSmith2025

Jan. 27, 2025

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thanks

I'm now writing this text now because a iI have alreadyjust discovered theis community.

“Already” = “já”

I was’ve been looking for a website to practice gGerman until now, but iI found this website and iI believe the community is engaginvested in learning together.

I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now iI will write about mine.

I woke up early, six our seven in the morning, did my workout, and after allwards geot my breakfast.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, y. Yesterday iI worked and now i'I’m thinking about going to the beach atin the afternoon.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, i'; I’m trying to dowrite a little text every day, but some days iI don't have noanything to right about, my mind just stops and I can't do progress.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, i. I also work with some cChinese guys and iI practice more eEnglish with chinese guysthem than with native eEnglish speakers.

At rOn Reddit, people are kind of rude and sarcastic, iand I don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if we wantless so if we’re just trying to improve ourselves as personople.

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Nicely done! Remember, the pronoun “I” (including contractions like “I’m”) and nationalities/languages are always capitalized in English. If you’re looking for things to write about in the future, maybe try summarizing or reviewing the movies or videos you’re watching.

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WordSmith2025

Jan. 27, 2025

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Thanks, i will work on it

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WordSmith2025

Jan. 27, 2025

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"I will" lol

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A chill sunday

I'm now writing this text because a iI have already discovered the community.

It's not clear what you're trying to convey here actually so I guessed what you meant and adjusted accordingly :).

Until now, I was looking for a website to practice gGerman until now, but iI found this website and iI believe that the community is well engaged inand wants to learn together.

Language names are always capitalized in English.

I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now i wiso I'll write about mine.

I woke up early at about six our seven in the morning, did my workout and after all get mythat I got breakfast.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, yesterday iI worked and now iI'm thinking about going to the beach at the afternoon.

The grammatical construct for the change: Go->going is called the gerund, you can read up online about the rules surrounding it if you are interested.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, iI'm trying to dowrite a little text every day, but some days iI don't have noanything to right about, my mind just stops and I can't do progress.

do->write: You can use do here, but using a more precise verb when possible is always better.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, iI also work with some cChinese guys and iI practice more eEnglish with chinese guysmore with them than with native eEnglish speakers.

No need to repeat "Chinese guys" twice, the second time around you can replace it with them.

AtOn reddit people are kind of rude and sarcastic, iI don't like this kind of behaviour, even more so if we want to improve ourselves as a person.

I think websites usually take the preposition "on", I.e. I bought this *on* Amazon. Not sure if this is a general rule or not, but on sounds better to me here.

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Good job! In English when referring to oneself I should always be capitalized. It can be kept lower case in things like texts, but even then I would say it's always preferable to capitalise it.

You made a few mistakes related to the gerund, I recommend reading about how it works as English seems to use it differently than other romance languages.

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WordSmith2025

Jan. 27, 2025

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in portuguese we use a loot of gerund, and its a great point to look at. thanks.

A chill sunday

I'm now writing this text because a iI have already discovered the community.

I was looking for a website to practice german until now, but i found this website and i believe the community is engaged into learn together.

I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now i will write about mine.

I woke up early around six our seven in the morning, did my workout and after allthat, I geot my breakfast.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, yesterday iI worked and now iI'm thinking about going to the beach atin the afternoon.

Capitalize ‘I’ as the first person pronoun always.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, iI'm trying to do a little text every day, but some days i don't have noanything to right about, my mind just stops and can't do progress.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, iI also work with some chinese guys and i practice more eEnglish with chinese guys than with native eEnglish speakers.

At reddit people are kind of rude and sarcastic, i. I don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if weyou want to improve yourselvef as as person.

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You’ve done well.
Apart from daily routines, you can write about topics that interest you; vehicle models, movie personalities, dating and marriage, education systems, anything.

When you don’t know what to write then you can look at the prompts.

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WordSmith2025

Jan. 27, 2025

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thanks, i will continue writing here.

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Love_2024

Jan. 28, 2025

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You’re welcome

A chill sunday


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A cChill sSunday

I'm now writing this text because a i have already discovered the community.


I'm now writing this text because a iI have already discovered the community.

I'm now writing this text because a iI have already discovered the community.

It's not clear what you're trying to convey here actually so I guessed what you meant and adjusted accordingly :).

I'm now writing this text now because a iI have alreadyjust discovered theis community.

“Already” = “já”

I'm now writing this text now because a iI have already discovered theis community.

I was looking for a website to practice german until now, but i found this website and i believe the community is engaged in learn together.


I was looking for a website to practice german until now, but i found this website and i believe the community is engaged into learn together.

Until now, I was looking for a website to practice gGerman until now, but iI found this website and iI believe that the community is well engaged inand wants to learn together.

Language names are always capitalized in English.

I was’ve been looking for a website to practice gGerman until now, but iI found this website and iI believe the community is engaginvested in learning together.

I was looking for a website to practice gGerman until now, but iI found this website and iI believe the community is engaged (in learning together / to learn together).

I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now i will write about mine.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now i wiso I'll write about mine.

I saw some people describing their morning routine, and now iI will write about mine.

I woke up early six ou seven in the morning, did my workout and after all get my breakfast.


I woke up early around six our seven in the morning, did my workout and after allthat, I geot my breakfast.

I woke up early at about six our seven in the morning, did my workout and after all get mythat I got breakfast.

I woke up early, six our seven in the morning, did my workout, and after allwards geot my breakfast.

I woke up early, six our seven in the morning, did my workout and after all gethat got my breakfast.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, yesterday i worked and now i'm thinking about go to the beach at the afternoon.


I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, yesterday iI worked and now iI'm thinking about going to the beach atin the afternoon.

Capitalize ‘I’ as the first person pronoun always.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, yesterday iI worked and now iI'm thinking about going to the beach at the afternoon.

The grammatical construct for the change: Go->going is called the gerund, you can read up online about the rules surrounding it if you are interested.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, y. Yesterday iI worked and now i'I’m thinking about going to the beach atin the afternoon.

I ate some eggs with bread and coffee, just a normal morning, y. Yesterday i worked and now iI'm thinking about going to the beach at the afternoon.

I really want some help to improve my writing in english, i'm trying to do a little text every day, but some days i don't have nothing to right abou, my mind just stop and can't do progress.


I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, iI'm trying to do a little text every day, but some days i don't have noanything to right about, my mind just stops and can't do progress.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, iI'm trying to dowrite a little text every day, but some days iI don't have noanything to right about, my mind just stops and I can't do progress.

do->write: You can use do here, but using a more precise verb when possible is always better.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, i'; I’m trying to dowrite a little text every day, but some days iI don't have noanything to right about, my mind just stops and I can't do progress.

I really want some help to improve my writing in eEnglish, iI'm trying to do a little text every day, but some days iI don't have noanything to wrighte about, my mind just stop and can't do progress.

"right" = "correct" or the direction. You want "write" here. They sound the same, but are spelled differently. "progress" is one of those words that works as a noun or a verb. "I don't have nothing" is a double negative. It's better to say "I don't have anything". This is one of those stereotypical things that native speakers often correct each other for getting wrong, to the point that certain dialects (e.g. AAVE) consider it normal, but for most dialects it's considered a mistake.

However, read and listen to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, i also work with some chinese guys and i practice more english with chinese guys than with native english speakers.


However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, iI also work with some chinese guys and i practice more eEnglish with chinese guys than with native eEnglish speakers.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, iI also work with some cChinese guys and iI practice more eEnglish with chinese guysmore with them than with native eEnglish speakers.

No need to repeat "Chinese guys" twice, the second time around you can replace it with them.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, i. I also work with some cChinese guys and iI practice more eEnglish with chinese guysthem than with native eEnglish speakers.

However, reading and listening to other people in movies and videos is part of my routine, i. I also work with some cChinese guys and i practice more eEnglish with cChinese guys than with native eEnglish speakers.

At reddit people are kind rude and sarcastic, i don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if we want to improve ourselves as person.


At reddit people are kind of rude and sarcastic, i. I don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if weyou want to improve yourselvef as as person.

AtOn reddit people are kind of rude and sarcastic, iI don't like this kind of behaviour, even more so if we want to improve ourselves as a person.

I think websites usually take the preposition "on", I.e. I bought this *on* Amazon. Not sure if this is a general rule or not, but on sounds better to me here.

At rOn Reddit, people are kind of rude and sarcastic, iand I don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if we wantless so if we’re just trying to improve ourselves as personople.

At reddit people are kind of rude and sarcastic, i. I don't like this kind of behaviour, even more if we wantso when we're trying to improve ourselves as personople.

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