Aug. 17, 2023
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Hey Matt,
Yuanmingyuan Park was originally built in 1709, and was improved by the later six Chinese emperors. It covered 3.5 square kilometers and was regarded as one of the perfect imperial parks in the world.
In 1860 and 1900, it was severely attacked by other countries' armies. Many precious items were robbed or destroyed.
The ruins you saw were what they looked like after other countries' armies destroyed the park (the government keeps it remaining).
Yuanmingyuan people visit now was rebuilt in 1988. It concludes Yuanmingyuan (the main park), Changchunyuan and Qichunyuan (the two affiliated parks), and the Yuanmingyuan heritage (site) park.
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Hey Matt,
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Yuanmingyuan Park was originally built in 1709, and was improved by the latersubsequent six Chinese emperors.
It covered 3.5 square kilometers and was regarded as one of the perfect imperial parks in the world.
In 1860 and 1900, it was severely attacked by the armies of other countries' armies.
I changed the word order to make it sound better (stylistic change).
Many precious items were robbed/stolen or destroyed.
The ruins you saw were what they looked like after the armies of the other countries' armies destroyed the park (the government keeps ithas conserved the remainings).
Yuanmingyuan people visit now was rebuilt in 1988The park was rebuilt in 1988 and ever since then, Yuanmingyuan people have been able to visit it.
I hope I understood what you meant here.
It concludesThe entire site consists of Yuanmingyuan (the main park), Changchunyuan and Qichunyuan (the two affiliated parks), and the Yuanmingyuan heritage (site) park.
Aug. 18, 2023
Yuanmingyuan people visit now was rebuilt in 1988The park was rebuilt in 1988 and ever since then, Yuanmingyuan people have been able to visit it.
Sorry, I think I should say “ Yuanmingyuan that people visit now was rebuilt in….”
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Hey Matt, Yuanmingyuan Park was originally built in 1709, and was improved by the later six Chinese emperors. Hey Matt, |
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It covered 3.5 square kilometers and was regarded as one of the perfect imperial parks in the world. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In 1860 and 1900, it was severely attacked by other countries' armies. In 1860 and 1900, it was severely attacked by the armies of other countries I changed the word order to make it sound better (stylistic change). |
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Many precious items were robbed or destroyed. Many precious items were robbed/stolen or destroyed. |
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The ruins you saw were what they looked like after other countries' armies destroyed the park (the government keeps it remaining). The ruins you saw were what they looked like after the armies of the other countries |
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Yuanmingyuan people visit now was rebuilt in 1988.
I hope I understood what you meant here. |
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It concludes Yuanmingyuan (the main park), Changchunyuan and Qichunyuan (the two affiliated parks), and the Yuanmingyuan heritage (site) park.
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