Aug. 13, 2023
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Hey Mat
I've got home now. Tiananmen Square is really sensitive to people who could remember things in 1989, but it is not sensitive to people who were born after 1989. In short, as an ordinary person, I don't have the right and I am not capable to judge political and historical events.
Tiananmen is a symbol of China, so it is highly guarded by the Chinese government to avoid dissidents creating disturbances.
Thank you for sending me the picture and video of the big mimosa tree. Before I saw it, I thought mimosa trees were grass plants, because the mimosa trees I saw in China were all planted in small pots.
I like the scenes in your video and picture: the blue sky, the white clouds, the trees and the bushes, as well as the small and quiet road. All of them give me the feeling that I feel like I am in the southern countryside in a mountainous area.
During this trip, I visited Yuanmingyuan Park, the National Stadium (also known as the Bird's Nest), the National Aquatic Center (also known as the Water Cube), Beidaihe Beach, Shanhai Pass and so on.
I took many pictures of the places I mentioned to you before. I just don't know which place I should show you first. So tell me if you are interested in any of them. Well, let me stop here and I will talk to you soon.
A Chat Message
Hey Mat
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I've gotreturned home now.
Tiananmen Square is a really sensitive topic to people who couldan remember things infrom 1989, but it is not sensitive to people who were born after 1989.
In short, as an ordinary person, I don't have the right and I am notor capableility to judge political and historical events.
Tiananmen is a symbol of China, so it is highly guarded by the Chinese government to avoid dissidents creating disturbances.
Thank you for sending me the picture and video of the big mimosa tree.
Before I saw ithem, I thought mimosa trees were grass plants, because the mimosa trees I saw in China were all planted in small pots.
This is not totally necessary; I just changed “it” to them because I feel that “picture and video” are the natural referents of the pronoun here.
I like the scenesry in your video and picture: the blue sky, the white clouds, the trees and the bushes, as well as the small and quiet road.
All of them give me the feeling that I feel like I amof being in the southern countryside in a mountainous area.
During this trip, I visited Yuanmingyuan Park, the National Stadium (also known as the Bird's Nest), the National Aquatic Center (also known as the Water Cube), Beidaihe Beach, Shanhai Pass and so on.
I took many pictures of the places I mentioned to you before.
I just don't know which place I should show you first.
So tTell me if you are interested in any of them.
Well, let me stop here and. I will talk to you soon.
Aug. 13, 2023
Thank you very much.
A Chat Message
Hey Mat I've got home now.
Tiananmen Square is really sensitive to people who couldan remember things infrom 1989, but it is not sensitive to people who were born after 1989.
"can" as something happening in the present. "from 1989".
In short, as an ordinary person, I don't have the right and I am not capable tof judgeing political and historical events.
You are "capable OF doing somthing". Needs be be followed by present participle not the infinitive.
Tiananmen is a symbol of China, so it is highly guarded by the Chinese government to avoid dissidents creating disturbances.
Thank you for sending me the picture and video of the big mimosa tree.
Before I saw it, I thought mimosa trees were grass planttypes of grass, because the mimosa trees I saw in China were all planted in small pots.
I like the scenes in your video and picture: the blue sky, the white clouds, the trees and the bushes, as well as the small and quiet road.
All of them give me the feeling that I feel like I amof being in a mountainous area in the southern countryside in a mountainous area.
During this trip, I visited Yuanmingyuan Park, the National Stadium (also known as the Bird's Nest), the National Aquatic Center (also known as the Water Cube), Beidaihe Beach, Shanhai Pass and so on.
I took many pictures of the places I mentioned to you before.
I just don't know which place I should show you first.
So tell me if you are interested in any of them.
Well, let me stop here and I will talk to you soon.
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Good just a few errors.
Aug. 13, 2023
Thank you very much.
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