Sept. 5, 2023
A Chat Message
I see. I have been looking for a place where it is like spring for many years, but I failed, because as you said, there is no such kind of place.
Do you know Yunnan province? The capital Kunming is called 春城. It means that the weather in Kunming seems like spring all year round.
Not only Kunming, but many other cities in Yunnan Province also have nice weather. The temperature in those cities is usually between 5 and 27 degrees Celsius.
Before, I wanted to buy an apartment in a medium sized coastal city in China. For example, on Hainan island. But now, I have changed my mind.
I will live a sojourn life in China, such as spending summer in the Shandong peninsula (where it is cool in summer), spending winter in Hainan island (where it is warm in winter).
However, I can only do it after I retire. In addition, before I live a sojourn life, I will spend three to five years travelling abroad and in China first. After I have done the traveling, maybe I will do a small business for fun if I am still healthy enough by then. Anyway, who knows?
Thank you for your messages. They gave me the opportunity to practice my writing. Bye bye and talk to you soon.
I have been looking for a place where it is always like spring for many years, but I failed, because as you said, there is no such (kind of) place.
an alternative:
- a place with perpetually spring-like weather
The sentence will sound more natural without “kind of”: there is no such place
Do you know Yunnan pProvince?
TheIts capital, Kunming, is called 春城.
It means that the weather in Kunming seems like spring all year round.
Not only Kunming, but many other cities in Yunnan Province also have nice weather.
The temperature in those cities is usually between 5 and 27 degrees Celsius.
Before, I wanted to buy an apartment in a medium sized coastal city in China, on Hainan island, for example.
For example, on Hainan island.
But now, I have changed my mind.
I will live a sojourner’s life / sojourn lifestyle in China, such as spending summers in the Shandong peninsula (where it is cool in summer), and spending winters in Hainan island (where it is warm in winter).
However, I can only do it / this after I retire.
In addition, before I livbecome a sojourn lifer, I will spend three to five years travelling abroad and in China first.
Traveling is spelled with one L in the US and two in the UK. Since you used just one L later in this post, I changed it here to be consistent.
After I have done the traveling / have finished traveling, maybe I will dorun / start a small business for fun if I am still healthy enough by then.
Anyway, who knows?
Thank you for your messages.
They gaive me the opportunity to practice my writing.
Present tense is better if you expect to receive more messages from him.
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Sojourn/sojourner is an uncommon word. I hadn’t read it in a long time. There’s nothing wrong with it, though. :-)
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I have been looking for a place where it is like spring for many years, but I failed, because as you said, there is no such kind of place. I have been looking for a place where it is always like spring for many years, but I failed, because as you said, there is no such (kind of) place. an alternative: - a place with perpetually spring-like weather The sentence will sound more natural without “kind of”: there is no such place |
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Do you know Yunnan province? Do you know Yunnan |
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The capital Kunming is called 春城.
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It means that the weather in Kunming seems like spring all year round. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Not only Kunming, but many other cities in Yunnan Province also have nice weather. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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The temperature in those cities is usually between 5 and 27 degrees Celsius. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Before, I wanted to buy an apartment in a medium sized coastal city in China. Before, I wanted to buy an apartment in a medium sized coastal city in China, on Hainan island, for example. |
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For example, on Hainan island. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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But now, I have changed my mind. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I will live a sojourn life in China, such as spending summer in the Shandong peninsula (where it is cool in summer), spending winter in Hainan island (where it is warm in winter). I will live a sojourner’s life / sojourn lifestyle in China, such as spending summers in the Shandong peninsula (where it is cool in summer), and spending winters in Hainan island (where it is warm in winter). |
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However, I can only do it after I retire. However, I can only do it / this after I retire. |
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In addition, before I live a sojourn life, I will spend three to five years travelling abroad and in China first. In addition, before I Traveling is spelled with one L in the US and two in the UK. Since you used just one L later in this post, I changed it here to be consistent. |
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After I have done the traveling, maybe I will do a small business for fun if I am still healthy enough by then. After I have done the traveling / have finished traveling, maybe I will |
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Anyway, who knows? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Thank you for your messages. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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They gave me the opportunity to practice my writing. They g Present tense is better if you expect to receive more messages from him. |
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Bye bye and talk to you soon. |
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