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I also want to thank everyone for helping and correctiong me.

yesterday iwas the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.

I studied twow English lessons and towo Spanish lessons.

Then, I listened to a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak upout loud.

In the afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore,. I hurry upied to go to bed;. I have a cervical hernia.

Therefore is too formal

I also want to thank everyone for helping and correctiong me.

Correction is the change made, the act of making a correction (in the present tense) is called correcting.

yYesterday iwas the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.

You're talking about an event that happened in the past, so you must use the past tense. is -> was.

I studied twow English lessons and tow Spanish lessons.

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Then, I listened to a part of the book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak upout loud.

I think you meant read it out loud instead of "speak up".

In the afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurryied up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia.

You're speaking in past tense so "felts" should be felt. Hurry should be in past tense.

yYesterday is the fourth day of my English and Spanish challenge.

I think this was just a typo.

I studied twow English lessons and towo Spanish lessons.

same here (two=2)

Then, I listened to a part of book" Diary Of A Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it speak up.out loud.

In theYesterday afternoon yesterday, I felts a pain in my neck and a back, therefore, I hurryied up to go to bed; I have a cervical hernia.

should be "hurried" because you are speaking in the past tense.