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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 20, 2022

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A Cat

My neighbor raised a cat named Xixi, she is 6 months now.
Xixi is half white and half black with blue eyes. I cannot describe it accurately, there is seems sth. magic power in her eyes which control this kind of animal, not by the brain.
She likes running and playing in my vegetable garden. My wife has been under big pressure about her job recently, I sent her a small clip of Xixi when she ran the gauntlet with a small dog, I said to my wife that the cute cat's funny clip might reduce her pressure.
I am not when will the Xixi find her boyfriend.

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A Cat

My neighbor raised a cat named Xixi, she is 6 months old now.

Xixi is half white and half black with blue eyes.

I cannot describe it accurately, there is seems sth.like

I am not when will tsure when Xixi will find her boyfriend.

A good effort

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Very well done overall. Do you think the cat is magical?

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 20, 2022

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Thanks for your correction first!
Yes, I think the cat is a magic animal, I believe there is some magic living in their eyes, and the feeling is different from any other animal.

My neighbor raised a cat named Xixi, she is 6 months old now.

I cannot describe it accurately, ithere is seems sth.ere is

magic power in her eyes which control this kind of animal, not byinstead of the brain.

I am not when will tsure when Xixi will find her boyfriend.

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Scarlett_Father

Nov. 20, 2022

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Thank you! :)

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My neighbor raised a cat named Xixi, she is 6 months now.


My neighbor raised a cat named Xixi, she is 6 months old now.

My neighbor raised a cat named Xixi, she is 6 months old now.

Xixi is half white and half black with blue eyes.


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I cannot describe it accurately, there is seems sth.


I cannot describe it accurately, ithere is seems sth.ere is

I cannot describe it accurately, there is seems sth.like

magic power in her eyes which control this kind of animal, not by the brain.


magic power in her eyes which control this kind of animal, not byinstead of the brain.

She likes running and playing in my vegetable garden.


My wife has been under big pressure about her job recently, I sent her a small clip of Xixi when she ran the gauntlet with a small dog, I said to my wife that the cute cat's funny clip might reduce her pressure.


I am not when will the Xixi find her boyfriend.


I am not when will tsure when Xixi will find her boyfriend.

I am not when will tsure when Xixi will find her boyfriend.

A good effort

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