July 27, 2022
A cat
A neighbor’s cat
Actually I do not like cats nor hate them, but I do have no pets it’s just because every time there is a cat passing over my house, it leaves such a terrible smell of its urine on the corner of my house by which I could be unbearably haunted. A cute kitty always approaches to me every time I pass by my neighbor’s house, it often comes with a poor face and a begging-food voice, then my heart can not do anything, and my mind said that I must find some fishy food for it. About 4: 30 p.m I had to go out to buy some grilled chicken mixed with cooked glutinous rice and feed it. When it saw me calling it, its instinct tells to itself that it has a big dinner today. Normally I feed it once a day, a traditional meal is a grilled small Fisch mixed in a fried chicken egg and rice, too. There is one thing that it never ever dare to come to my house, since I do not allow any cat, caught by me, towards wich I will throw a mug of water. I do not know whether what I do is cruel to them or not, but at the bottom of my heart I have no hate to them at all, I am willing to share the food that I have in my bowl, even a little with them.
This is the first time I wrote in English, I need to activate my English here, thankfully!
Actually I do not like cats nor, but I don't hate them, but. I do not have noany pets it’s just becausebut every time there is a cat passing overes by my house, it leaves such a terrible smell of its urine on the corner of my house by which I could be unbearably haunted which I cannot bear.
Removed some redundancies and corrected logical flow of sentences.
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Nice expressions but remember to separate distinct ideas into different sentences.
At about 4: 30 p.m., I had to gowent out to buy some grilled chicken mixed with cooked glutinous rice andto feed ithe cat.
When it saw me calling it,to its, instinct tells to itself that it hast thought that it would have a big dinner today.
Normally, I feed it once a day, - a traditional meal is a grilled small Ffisch mixed inwith a fried chicken egg and rice, too.
There is one thing that it never However, the cat would never dare to come to my house, since I do not allow any cat, caught by me, towards wich I will throw a mug of waterwould throw water at it if it got too close.
I do not know whether what I do is cruel to them or not, but at the bottom of my heart I have no hate to them at all, I am willing to share the food that I have in my bowl, even a little with them with them, even if it's just a little.
Nice sentence.
This is the first time I wrote in English,. I need to practivatse my English here, t. Thankfully you!
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Really well done for a first attempt, keep at it!
July 29, 2022
Thankfully, your corrections shine brightly my ideas again in a clear, simple expression!
A cCat
We usually capitalize the first letter of important words in a title.
A nNeighbor’s cCat
Actually I do notI neither like cats nor hate them, but I don't have noany pets it’s just because every time there is a cat passing overes by my house, it leaves such a terrible smell of its urine on the corner of my house by which I could be unbearably hauntedand I can't stand it.
This sounds more natural in the US.
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At about 4: 30 p.m, I had to go out to buy some grilled chicken mixed with cooked glutinous rice andto feed it.
When it sawheard me calling it, its knew instinct tells to itsivelfy that it hasd a big dinner today.
Normally I feed it once a day, a. A traditional meal is a small grilled small Ffisch mixed in awith fried chicken, egg and rice, too.
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I do non't know whether what I do isI'm cruel to them or not, but at, from the bottom of my heart, I have no hate towards them at all,. I a'm willing to share the food that I have in my bowl, even if it's just a little wbith them.
This is the first time I wrote in English, I need to . Thankfully, I can practivatce my English here, thankfully!
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You did a really good job. Nice work!
July 27, 2022
Thankfully, your correction shines clearly my errors!
A cCat
A nNeighbor’s cCat
Just a reminder to capitalize the first letter of each word (except prepositions) in titles!
Actually, I do notneither particularly like cats nor hate them, but I do not have no pets it’sany, just because every time there is a cat passing overes by my house, it leaves such a terrible smell of its urine on the outside corner of my house by, which I could bhaunts me unbearably haunted.
"Pass by" is better in this situation, "pass over" almost implies the cat is flying over your house!
A cute kitty always approaches to me every time I pass by my neighbor’s house, i. It often comes with a poorsad face and a begging-food voice, thenpurr that seems to be begging for food. When this happens it breaks my heart can not do anything, and my mind said that I mustd I have to find some fishy food for it.
When cats make sounds they are said to "purr" or "meow," talking about their "voice" sounds a little odd.
At about 4: 30 p.m., I had to go out to buy some grilled chicken mixed with cooked glutinous rice andto feed it.
When it saw me calling it, its instinct tells to itselfually knew that it hasd a big dinner coming today.
Normally I feed it once a day,; a traditional meal is a grilled small Ffisch mixed inwith a fried chicken egg and rice, too.
TBut there is one thing that it never will never dare to do: come to my house, since I do not allow any cats, caught by me, towards wichand, if I catch one, I will throw a mugglass of water. at it!
I do not know whether what I doit is cruel to do that to them or not, but at the bottom of my heart, I have no hate towards them at all,. I am willing to share the food that I have in my bowl, even if just a little, with them.
This is the first time I wrohave written in English,. I need to activateam looking forward to using my English here, thankfully!
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Very good! It sounds like that you feed that cat well - it was making me hungry.
Keep practicing your English writing!
July 27, 2022
Thankfully!
A cat
A neighbor’s cat
Actually, I do not like cats nor hate them, but I don't have noany pets it’s just. It's because every time there is a cat passing overes by my house, it leaves such a terrible smell of its urine on the corner of mythe house by, which I could be unbearably hauntedbothers me greatly.
A cute kitty always approaches to me every time I pass by my neighbor’s house,; it often comes at me with a poorsad face and a food-begging-food voice, whine; then my heart can not do anythingis powerless, and my mind saidys that I must find some fishy food for it.
About 4: 30 p.m, I had to go out to buy some grilled chicken mixed with cooked glutinous rice and feed it.
When it sawees me calling it, its instinct tells to itself that it hasit that it will have a big dinner today.
Normally I feed it once a day,; a traditional meal is a small grilled small Ffisch mixed in a fried chicken egg and rice, too.
There is one thing that it never ever dares to do: come to my house, since I do not allow any cat, caught by me, towards wich Is and will throw a mug of water on any cat I catch.
I do not know whether what I do is cruel to them or not, but atin the bottom of my heart, I have no hate tofor them at all,; I am willing to share the food that I have in my bowl, even a little, with them.
This is the first time I've wroitten in English,. I need to activate my English here, thankfully!
I need to activate my English here, thankfully! = the meaning of this phrase in unclear.
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Good luck with your English.
You are off to a good start.
July 27, 2022
This is the first time I've wroitten in English,. I need to activate my English here, thankfully!
I put this word ,thankfully‘ in the wrong position, which makes misunderstand.
I need to activate my English here. I would like to thank you for your correction!
July 27, 2022
Thank you!
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Actually I do not like cats nor hate them, but I do have no pets it’s just because every time there is a cat passing over my house, it leaves such a terrible smell of its urine on the corner of my house by which I could be unbearably haunted. Actually, I do not like cats nor hate them, but I don't have Actually, I "Pass by" is better in this situation, "pass over" almost implies the cat is flying over your house!
This sounds more natural in the US.
Removed some redundancies and corrected logical flow of sentences. |
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A cute kitty always approaches to me every time I pass by my neighbor’s house, it often comes with a poor face and a begging-food voice, then my heart can not do anything, and my mind said that I must find some fishy food for it. A cute kitty always approaches to me every time I pass by my neighbor’s house A cute kitty always approaches When cats make sounds they are said to "purr" or "meow," talking about their "voice" sounds a little odd. A cute kitty always approaches A cute kitty always approaches Nice expressions but remember to separate distinct ideas into different sentences. |
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There is one thing that it never ever dare to come to my house, since I do not allow any cat, caught by me, towards wich I will throw a mug of water. There is one thing that it never ever dares to do: come to my house, since I do not allow any cat
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