April 26, 2023
A carambola
Describe an item: a carambola.
When you look at a carambola, from which angle do you see it? I remember seeing this thing for the first time in elementary school. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything. From different angles, the facts are observed differently. Interesting.
( The previous article I am going to rewrite it. It seems I made a lot of errors)
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One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything." One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything."
From different angles, the facts areobject is observed differently.
From different angles, the object is observed differently.
'facts' is a little unclear here - another suggestion would be 'people see different things at different angles' or 'from different angles, different things are observed.'
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great work!
April 27, 2023
Thanks for the corrections !:)
One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything”. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything”.
April 26, 2023
Thanks for the corrections!:)
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A carambola |
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Describe an item: a carambola. |
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When you look at a carambola, from which angle do you see it? |
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I remember seeing this thing for the first time in elementary school. |
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One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything”. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything”. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything." One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything." |
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From different angles, the facts are observed differently.
From different angles, the 'facts' is a little unclear here - another suggestion would be 'people see different things at different angles' or 'from different angles, different things are observed.' |
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Interesting. |
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( The previous article I am going to rewrite it. It seems I made a lot of errors) |
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