April 26, 2023
A carambola
Describe an item: a carambola.
When you look at a carambola, from which angle do you see it? I remember seeing this thing for the first time in elementary school. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything. From different angles, the facts are observed differently. Interesting.
( The previous article I am going to rewrite it. It seems I made a lot of errors)
One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything."
From different angles, the facts areobject is observed differently.
'facts' is a little unclear here - another suggestion would be 'people see different things at different angles' or 'from different angles, different things are observed.'
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great work!
April 27, 2023
Thanks for the corrections !:)
One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything”.
April 26, 2023
Thanks for the corrections!:)
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A carambola |
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Describe an item: a carambola. |
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When you look at a carambola, from which angle do you see it? |
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I remember seeing this thing for the first time in elementary school. |
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One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything”. One boy said, "I see it as a pentagram" (from the front of it), and another boy said, "I don't see anything." |
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From different angles, the facts are observed differently. From different angles, the 'facts' is a little unclear here - another suggestion would be 'people see different things at different angles' or 'from different angles, different things are observed.' |
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Interesting. |
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( The previous article I am going to rewrite it. It seems I made a lot of errors) |
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