July 31, 2021
Few weeks ago, I start a one-week training program.
In that week I will jogging one hour each day.
The result was good.
But there just a little problem about location.
I need to take a bus go to that sport center, which needs 45 minutes to an hour.
In total will be around 2 hours.
This week I decided to jogging at my house.
I was thinking I can save a big deal of time.
But the truth isn’t what I thinking at all.
Because I don’t need to take the bus hence, I get up late.
I spend longer time in eating breakfast, shower…
In a real comparison go to sport center will be more effective.
FA few weeks ago, I started a one-week training program.
If you’re discussing the past, then you need to use a past-tense of “start.”
In that week, I willas jogging one hour each day.
Past-tense
The result was good.
B, but there justwas a little problem about the location.
You can’t really start a sentence with “but.” You have to use a comma (although not always, but typically).
“Just” sounds funny in the sentence.
Not adding “the” before “location” sounds very wrong. “The” tells us that you’re referring to a specific place.
I neehad to take a bus to go to that sport center, which needstook 45 minutes to an hour.
Still past-tense. No need for “need” in that sentence. Although, you could say “I needed to take a bus” but “had” sounds more natural.
In total will beit took around 2 hours.
Past-tense.
This week I decided to jogging at my house.
“Jog at my house” or “to go jogging at my house.”
I was thinking I canthat I could save a biggreat deal of time.
Past-tense. Also “great deal of time” sounds more natural than “big deal of time.”
ButHowever, the truth iwasn’t what I was thinking at all.
Not sure what you mean by “the truth”… what truth? The “reality” perhaps?
BecausSince I doidn’t need to take the bus hence, I get up late., I woke up later than usual.
(1) Typically we never start a sentence with “because.” (2) add punctuation. Try to look up English punctuation rules! (3) you could say “I got up,” but it’s casual speak. “Woke up” is more specific. (4) The “usual” part adds more specification.
I spendt a longer time in eating breakfast, and shower…ing.
You could also say “taking a shower.” Also, you want to keep the flow of the words the same. If you start a sentence with “eating” and then you add more activities, make sure you end them with “-ing.” Example: “I ate and took a shower” is correct and so is “I was eat*ing* and tak*ing* a shower” or “She is cooking and crying at the same time.” Hope that makes sense.
In a realBy comparison, go toing to the sport center will beis more effective.
You could also say “going to the sports center would have been more effective.”
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Good spelling and vocabulary, but grammar needs some work (particularly past-tense). Also, try to learn about English punctuation. It’s pretty easy to memorize, I think, and it makes a HUGE difference on how a sentence is interpreted. For instance, “We should eat, Grace” versus “We should eat Grace.” One is talking to Grace and the other is saying that Grace should be our food. Good luck :-)
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Your sentence is good! You can also say "But the location was not ideal"; or "But the location was a little problematic."
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I spend a longer time in eating breakfast, showering…
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There's a saying: "the best laid plans of mice and men often go astray." At least you are making time to exercise!
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Few weeks ago, I start a one-week training program.
If you’re discussing the past, then you need to use a past-tense of “start.” |
In that week I will jogging one hour each day.
In that week, I w Past-tense |
The result was good. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
But there just a little problem about location. But there just a little problem about location. Your sentence is good! You can also say "But the location was not ideal"; or "But the location was a little problematic."
You can’t really start a sentence with “but.” You have to use a comma (although not always, but typically). “Just” sounds funny in the sentence. Not adding “the” before “location” sounds very wrong. “The” tells us that you’re referring to a specific place. |
I need to take a bus go to that sport center, which needs 45 minutes to an hour. I I Still past-tense. No need for “need” in that sentence. Although, you could say “I needed to take a bus” but “had” sounds more natural. |
In total will be around 2 hours. In total In total Past-tense. |
This week I decided to jogging at my house. This week I decided to jog This week I decided to jog “Jog at my house” or “to go jogging at my house.” |
I was thinking I can save a big deal of time. I was thinking I can save a I was thinking Past-tense. Also “great deal of time” sounds more natural than “big deal of time.” |
But the truth isn’t what I thinking at all. But the truth isn’t what I was thinking at all. Or, "But the reality wasn't what I expected."
Not sure what you mean by “the truth”… what truth? The “reality” perhaps? |
Because I don’t need to take the bus hence, I get up late. Because I don
(1) Typically we never start a sentence with “because.” (2) add punctuation. Try to look up English punctuation rules! (3) you could say “I got up,” but it’s casual speak. “Woke up” is more specific. (4) The “usual” part adds more specification. |
I spend longer time in eating breakfast, shower… I spend a longer time I spen You could also say “taking a shower.” Also, you want to keep the flow of the words the same. If you start a sentence with “eating” and then you add more activities, make sure you end them with “-ing.” Example: “I ate and took a shower” is correct and so is “I was eat*ing* and tak*ing* a shower” or “She is cooking and crying at the same time.” Hope that makes sense. |
In a real comparison go to sport center will be more effective. In
You could also say “going to the sports center would have been more effective.” |
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