Aug. 2, 2021
A busy day, today
Today was a busy day. I did things I don't used to do. I was out of my home most of the day, didn't read nor write anything. Today I wanted to continue the writing of a fictional dialogue. Now, I don't feel I'm in the mood for that. May be tomorrow.
While J. was driving I thought of all the unconscious decision we took along the day. I don't know exactly what this means, it just stroke me as a passing idea. Other thing I've been thinking about this day is that all the researches - at least those that are in the field of humanities- are essentially discourses. With this I mean that every result should be express in a text that resemble a speech. It has to be coherent and articulated, as a history. The order is critical too. What matter should be addressed first? Can be use a sort of historical criteria? Or is it better to use one based on the importance of the given subject? These are questions that I think every humanist have resolved before. But, they are encrypted in the structure an tone of theirs texts.
Now, I only want to sleep.
A bBusy dDay, t Today
We capitalise all the key words in titles
Today was a busy day.
I did things I don't used toually do.
I'm not sure what you want to express. You could say "things I don't usually do" or "things I am not used to doing."
I was out of mythe homuse most of the day, I didn't read nor write anything.
did not ... or
neither... nor
Today I wanted to continue the writing of a fictional dialogue.
Your original is grammatically fine but this is more natural.
Now, I don't feel I'm in the mood for that.
May be tomorrow.
While J. was driving I thought of all the unconscious decisions we took alongthroughout the day.
I don't know exactly what this means, it just strokeuck me as a passing idea.
strike, struck, have struck - golpear (fuerte)
stroke, stroked, have stroked - acariciar (suave)
OAnother thing I've been thinking about this oday is that all the researches - at least those (that are) in the field of humanities- areis essentially discourses.
research - uncountable
With this I mean that every result should be expressed in a text that resembles a speech.
It has to be coherent and articulated, as a history.
You could also write "like a story", depending on what you want to express.
The order is critical too.
What matter should be addressed first?
Can be use asome sort of historical criteria be used?
I'm not sure what you mean by historical criteria, especially since "historia" is hard to translate and you mentioned a story before...
Or is it better to use onecriteria based on the importance of the given subject?
"criteria" is plural
These are questions that I think every humanist have resolvs considered before.
I don't think "resolve" is the correct verb, because that implies that a final answer has been found.
But, they are encrypted in the structure and tone of theirs texts.
Now, I only want to sleep.
Feedback
Pues descánsate amigo!
Aug. 4, 2021
Lo hice! Muchas gracias :)
|
A busy day, today A We capitalise all the key words in titles |
|
Today was a busy day. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
I did things I don't used to do. I did things I don't us I'm not sure what you want to express. You could say "things I don't usually do" or "things I am not used to doing." |
|
I was out of my home most of the day, didn't read nor write anything. I was out of did not ... or neither... nor |
|
Today I wanted to continue the writing of a fictional dialogue. Today I wanted to continue Your original is grammatically fine but this is more natural. |
|
Now, I don't feel I'm in the mood for that. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
May be tomorrow. May |
|
While J. was driving I thought of all the unconscious decision we took along the day. While J. was driving I thought of all the unconscious decisions we took |
|
I don't know exactly what this means, it just stroke me as a passing idea. I don't know exactly what this means, it just str strike, struck, have struck - golpear (fuerte) stroke, stroked, have stroked - acariciar (suave) |
|
Other thing I've been thinking about this day is that all the researches - at least those that are in the field of humanities- are essentially discourses.
research - uncountable |
|
With this I mean that every result should be express in a text that resemble a speech. With this I mean that every result should be expressed in a text that resembles a speech. |
|
It has to be coherent and articulated, as a history. It has to be coherent and articulated You could also write "like a story", depending on what you want to express. |
|
The order is critical too. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
What matter should be addressed first? This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
|
Can be use a sort of historical criteria? Can I'm not sure what you mean by historical criteria, especially since "historia" is hard to translate and you mentioned a story before... |
|
Or is it better to use one based on the importance of the given subject? Or is it better to use "criteria" is plural |
|
These are questions that I think every humanist have resolved before. These are questions that I think every humanist ha I don't think "resolve" is the correct verb, because that implies that a final answer has been found. |
|
But, they are encrypted in the structure an tone of theirs texts. But, they are encrypted in the structure and tone of their |
|
Now, I only want to sleep. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature.
Go Premium