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A business report: A trade fair (C1 CAE Writing)

A business report: A trade fair
You recently attended a trade fair in another country. Your manager has now asked you to write a report about your visit to the fair.


Write the report, describing your visit to the trade fair and including the following points:


• which other companies were represented
• how you spent your time
• what information you obtained
• whether or not you recommend attending the fair next year (and why).

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(ANSWER)

Insights in the recent technology fair in Catalonia

Introduction
Important changes have been expected for the International Technology Fair, which have taken place in Catalonia this year, especially in the application of bluetooth wireless connection to devices installed on common home elements, such as, fridge, oven,.... This new focus could be really interesting for our company in order to expand our client portfolio.

Companies expositions in the fair
Most of our competitors in our field of bluetooth devices design were not present in the international event this year. It was shocking because it will open a new world of possibilities in this area. Probably, they thought these new applications would not be successful in the market.
Because of that, I could find a huge diversity of bussiness linked to home appliances, from kitchen to gardening tools. For example, a affordable irrigation system controlled by an app.

My work in the event
Besides the findings previously explained, I could get to know some of our new potential clients, some of who are really interested in our company, so we should start working with them on my return. Due to the incredibly number of companies, I was not able to get in touch with all of them. Nevertheless, that doesn't seem to be a problem. We may propose an update to the old-fashioned bussiness related to home appliances.

Changes expected to the next year
The last day was shown a preview of what is going to be exposed in the following fair, which will be in London in this occassion. In short, nothing to be worried about, because in this case it will be focused mainly on computer games.

Conclusion
In summary, new marketing opportunities shown this year will enable considerably expand our client portfolio on very different and unexpected areas.

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Write the report, describing your visit to the trade fair and includinge the following points:

Insights ion the recent technology fair in Catalonia

Important changes have been expected forin the International Technology Fair, which have taken place in Catalonia this year, e. Especially inabout the application of bluetooth wireless connection to devices installed on common home elements, such as, fridge, oven, etc....

This new focus could be really interesting for our company in order to expand our client portfolio.

Companies expositions attending the fair

Most of our competitors in our field of bluetooth devices design were not present in the international event this year.

It was shocking because ithe event will open a new world of possibilities in this area.

Probably, the They probably thought these new applications would not be successful in the market.

Because of that, I could find a huge diversityrange of bussiness linked to home appliances, from kitchen to gardening tools.

For example, an affordable irrigation system controlled by an app.

Besides the findings previously explained, I could get to know some of our new potential clients, some of whoich are really interested in our company, so we should start working withapproaching them on my return.

Due to the incredibly high number of companies, I was not able to get in touch with all of them.

We maycan propose an update to the old-fashioned bussinessess related to home appliances.

Changes expected toin the next year

TIn the last day was shown a preview of what is going to be exposed in the following fair was shown, which will be in London in this occassion.

In short, nothing to be worried about, because in this case itnext year the fair will be focused mainly on computer games.

In summary, new marketing opportunities shown this year will enable us to considerably expand our client portfolio oin very different and unexpected areas.

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isaac

March 16, 2022

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Thank you so much Alya for your help

A business report: A trade fair (C1 CAE Writing)


A business report: A trade fair


You recently attended a trade fair in another country.


Your manager has now asked you to write a report about your visit to the fair.


Write the report, describing your visit to the trade fair and including the following points:


Write the report, describing your visit to the trade fair and includinge the following points:

• which other companies were represented


• how you spent your time


• what information you obtained


• whether or not you recommend attending the fair next year (and why).


-----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------


(ANSWER)


Insights in the recent technology fair in Catalonia


Insights ion the recent technology fair in Catalonia

Introduction


Important changes have been expected for the International Technology Fair, which have taken place in Catalonia this year, especially in the application of bluetooth wireless connection to devices installed on common home elements, such as, fridge, oven,....


Important changes have been expected forin the International Technology Fair, which have taken place in Catalonia this year, e. Especially inabout the application of bluetooth wireless connection to devices installed on common home elements, such as, fridge, oven, etc....

This new focus could be really interesting for our company in order to expand our client portfolio.


This new focus could be really interesting for our company in order to expand our client portfolio.

Companies expositions in the fair


Companies expositions attending the fair

Most of our competitors in our field of bluetooth devices design were not present in the international event this year.


Most of our competitors in our field of bluetooth devices design were not present in the international event this year.

It was shocking because it will open a new world of possibilities in this area.


It was shocking because ithe event will open a new world of possibilities in this area.

Probably, they thought these new applications would not be successful in the market.


Probably, the They probably thought these new applications would not be successful in the market.

Because of that, I could find a huge diversity of bussiness linked to home appliances, from kitchen to gardening tools.


Because of that, I could find a huge diversityrange of bussiness linked to home appliances, from kitchen to gardening tools.

For example, a affordable irrigation system controlled by an app.


For example, an affordable irrigation system controlled by an app.

My work in the event


Besides the findings previously explained, I could get to know some of our new potential clients, some of who are really interested in our company, so we should start working with them on my return.


Besides the findings previously explained, I could get to know some of our new potential clients, some of whoich are really interested in our company, so we should start working withapproaching them on my return.

Due to the incredibly number of companies, I was not able to get in touch with all of them.


Due to the incredibly high number of companies, I was not able to get in touch with all of them.

Nevertheless, that doesn't seem to be a problem.


We may propose an update to the old-fashioned bussiness related to home appliances.


We maycan propose an update to the old-fashioned bussinessess related to home appliances.

Changes expected to the next year


Changes expected toin the next year

The last day was shown a preview of what is going to be exposed in the following fair, which will be in London in this occassion.


TIn the last day was shown a preview of what is going to be exposed in the following fair was shown, which will be in London in this occassion.

In short, nothing to be worried about, because in this case it will be focused mainly on computer games.


In short, nothing to be worried about, because in this case itnext year the fair will be focused mainly on computer games.

Conclusion


In summary, new marketing opportunities shown this year will enable considerably expand our client portfolio on very different and unexpected areas.


In summary, new marketing opportunities shown this year will enable us to considerably expand our client portfolio oin very different and unexpected areas.

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