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glimpg

June 20, 2021

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A bunker

Not a tree-house or a tent, but a bunker. In my city there aren't many trees, specially in my neighborhood. The soil is dry and requires treatment in order to be useful to plant anything. My dad is an engineer and he has lots of tools stored in the garage. Some friends from the neighborhood and I were watching some movie, I can't even remember what It was, might have been about WW2? The thing is we got excited and decided to dig some trenches. For a bunch of kids, we got a solid hole, actually around 4 feet deep. We used it for less than a week, and even though we tried to camp in it by night, our parents convinced us there was a reason why survivors from the docummentaries don't usually dig holes. Also, we tried to keep working on it a bit later, but since my house was at the top of a cliff, my dad thought it wasn't the brightest idea due to soil and ground strength that could pose a hazard to the stability of the house. Maybe it was just his way to keep his tools where we found them.
A few years later it was used as a common grave for a lot of pets.

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Not a tree-house or a tent, but a bunker.

In my city there aren't many trees, especially in my neighborhood.

The soil is dry and requires treatment in order to be useful to plant anything.

My dad is an engineer and he has lots of tools stored in the garage.

Some friends from the neighborhood and I were watching somea movie, I can't even remember what Iit was, might have been about WW2?

The thing is, we got excited and decided to dig some trenches.

For a bunch of kids, we got a solid hole, actually around 4 feet deep.

We used it for less than a week, and even though we tried to camp in it by night, our parents convinced us there was a reason why survivors from the docummentaries don't usually dig holes.

Also, we tried to keep working on it a bit later, but since my house was at the top of a cliff, my dad thought it wasn't the brightest idea due to the soil and ground strength that could pose a hazard to the stability of the house.

Maybe it was just his way to keep his tools where we found them.

A few years later it was used as a common grave for a lot of pets.

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glimpg

June 20, 2021

1

thank you pal!

A bunker


Not a tree-house or a tent, but a bunker.


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In my city there aren't many trees, specially in my neighborhood.


In my city there aren't many trees, especially in my neighborhood.

The soil is dry and requires treatment in order to be useful to plant anything.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

My dad is an engineer and he has lots of tools stored in the garage.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some friends from the neighborhood and I were watching some movie, I can't even remember what It was, might have been about WW2?


Some friends from the neighborhood and I were watching somea movie, I can't even remember what Iit was, might have been about WW2?

The thing is we got excited and decided to dig some trenches.


The thing is, we got excited and decided to dig some trenches.

For a bunch of kids, we got a solid hole, actually around 4 feet deep.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We used it for less than a week, and even though we tried to camp in it by night, our parents convinced us there was a reason why survivors from the docummentaries don't usually dig holes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, we tried to keep working on it a bit later, but since my house was at the top of a cliff, my dad thought it wasn't the brightest idea due to soil and ground strength that could pose a hazard to the stability of the house.


Also, we tried to keep working on it a bit later, but since my house was at the top of a cliff, my dad thought it wasn't the brightest idea due to the soil and ground strength that could pose a hazard to the stability of the house.

Maybe it was just his way to keep his tools where we found them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A few years later it was used as a common grave for a lot of pets.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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