March 5, 2021
A Book Jacket
I usually use a book cover jacket when I read a paperback. (In Japan, it is common to use a protector that is made of paper, leather, or cloth. The purpose is protecting a book, or hiding the cover.) These kinds of books don't have a bookmark, and the covers are vulnerable, so the book jacket is useful. My father sent me it for my birthday present when I was a kid. He hoped I became a keen reader because I didn't study very hard, and now the attempt is successful.
A Book Jacket
I usually use a book cover jacket when I read a paperback.
(In Japan, it is common to use a protector that is made of paper, leather, or cloth. The purpose is protecting a book, or hiding the cover.) These kinds of books don't have a bookmark, and the covers are vulnerable, so the book jacket is useful.
The purpose is to protect a book, or hide the cover.
‘Vulnerable’ is more often used with people than with objects. You could say ‘the covers are fragile’ instead.
My father sent me it for my birthday present when I was a kid.
My father sent it to me as a birthday present when I was a kid.
He hoped I became a keen reader because I didn't study very hard, and now the attempt is successful.
He hoped I would become a keen reader because I didn’t study very hard. The attempt was successful. (Or “The attempt has been successful.)
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As a fellow reader, I enjoyed reading about the story behind your book cover! Your writing is great, keep it up :D
March 6, 2021
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(In Japan, it is common to use a protector that is made of paper, leather, or cloth. The purpose is protecting a book, or hiding the cover.) These kinds of books don't have a bookmark, and the covers are vulnerable, so the book jacket is useful. (In Japan, it is common to use a protector that is made of paper, leather, or cloth. The purpose is protecting a book, or hiding the cover.) These kinds of books don't have a bookmark, and the covers are vulnerable, so the book jacket is useful. The purpose is to protect a book, or hide the cover. ‘Vulnerable’ is more often used with people than with objects. You could say ‘the covers are fragile’ instead. |
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My father sent me it for my birthday present when I was a kid. My father sent me it for my birthday present when I was a kid. My father sent it to me as a birthday present when I was a kid. |
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He hoped I became a keen reader because I didn't study very hard, and now the attempt is successful. He hoped I became a keen reader because I didn't study very hard, and now the attempt is successful. He hoped I would become a keen reader because I didn’t study very hard. The attempt was successful. (Or “The attempt has been successful.) |
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