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Tammy

March 27, 2024

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A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago. It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.


正在读的书

几个月前,一个朋友推荐了一本书给我,就是《原子习惯》。

我在天猫买了本英文版,超喜欢!

里边的英文对我来说刚好,不太难。

更重要的是,作者呈现了一个非常有用的系统,帮助像我这样的人培养更好的喜欢。

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A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months agoSUGGESTION: Combine these 2 sentences into 1 sentence like this -- A few months ago one of my friends recommended a book called "Atomic Habits" by James Clear.

(I mentioned the name of the author also.)

It's called "Atomic Habits".[SEE COMMENT ABOVE]

ALSO POSSIBLE: I bought an English version on from an online vendor known as "Tmall" and like it very much.

(Some people outside of China might not know about Tmall, so this wording might be clearer.)

The English level in the book is just right for me,; it is not too difficult.

PUNCTUATION: Change the comma to a semi-colon.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

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I read this book about a year ago. It has some good ideas. The challenge is to maintain good habits over a long time. (Old habits sometimes return.)

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Tammy

March 28, 2024

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Thank you!

Yes, you're right. I'm trying to use those strategies in the book to maintain habits. I hope it will work.

About The Book I'm Reading

"A Book I'm Reading" sounds too curt

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

I bought an English version on Tmall and liked it very much. (OR: ...and I am very much enjoying it)

The English level in the book is just right for me, as it is not too difficult.

"as" demonstrates reasoning for the sentence you said before

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

Feedback

Sounds like an interesting book! I've never been one for self help books, but maybe I should indulge in it just this once!

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Tammy

March 28, 2024

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Thank you for your corrections!

I think this book is really useful for a lifelong learner.

A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

Feedback

Perfect!!

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Tammy

March 28, 2024

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Thank you!

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A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

Feedback

That's a great book!

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Tammy

March 28, 2024

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Yeah! I'm lucky to read it when I thought I had so much to do but so little time.

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A Book I'm Reading

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.

It's called "Atomic Habits".

I bought an English version on Tmall and I like it very much.

The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.

More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.

Feedback

Perfect! I also read that book and found it helpful :)

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Tammy

March 28, 2024

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Thank you!

It's helpful indeed.

One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months ago.


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One of my friends recommended a book to me a few months agoSUGGESTION: Combine these 2 sentences into 1 sentence like this -- A few months ago one of my friends recommended a book called "Atomic Habits" by James Clear.

(I mentioned the name of the author also.)

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It's called "Atomic Habits".[SEE COMMENT ABOVE]

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I bought an English version on Tmall and like it very much.


I bought an English version on Tmall and I like it very much.

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I bought an English version on Tmall and liked it very much. (OR: ...and I am very much enjoying it)

ALSO POSSIBLE: I bought an English version on from an online vendor known as "Tmall" and like it very much.

(Some people outside of China might not know about Tmall, so this wording might be clearer.)

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The English level in the book is just right for me, it is not too difficult.


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The English level in the book is just right for me, as it is not too difficult.

"as" demonstrates reasoning for the sentence you said before

The English level in the book is just right for me,; it is not too difficult.

PUNCTUATION: Change the comma to a semi-colon.

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More importantly, the author presents a useful system to help people like me form better habits.


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A Book I'm Reading


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About The Book I'm Reading

"A Book I'm Reading" sounds too curt

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